Reviews for Cross The Line
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Horrible?
No.
Heck, no! Quite a little turn-on there, actually.

I would bet that Lilly had that in mind from the start. Maybe only subconsciously, but she HAD to know SOMETHING about the way Miley felt.
friends and p-f4ever chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
"I could care less if you see my boobs." Best line, especially since I use it all the time with my friends. xD Loved it, loved it, LOVED it!
Ninjamaster-255 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
SWEET
Meaghan Gibson chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Reaaally good.
Fayneir chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Great fic. The last bit was unexpected.
MissAlexLongbottom chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Omg i freakin loved it.

it was horrible at all.
DisneyFanGirl27 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
To be honest with you I liked all that tension with the massaging and stuff but nice job. I liked that they ended up realiving themselves. ;)
iceonthewing chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
ah i loved this! the end made me laugh, I think it was quite original *nod*

:)
Music and Reading Lover chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I loved it!
dare121 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
"Oh, I'll be your girlfriend, until you're my wife."

yes xD Awesome story. Lotion and a half naked Lilly, double win. Now Lilly just has to get rid of that enormous Ollie-pop lollie-pop. That thing creeps me out! :D

Love
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Oh my gosh that was so cool!

Awesome and hot and fluffy and funny! Just a great read!

Thanks!
lileyfan123 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Another great work from you. Love how it all started with the massage. Glad Lilly broke up with Oliver.
dekutree64 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
That was quite the opposite or horrible. I think Lilly just wanted to get Miley's hands all over her from the start :)

I love your oneshots. The girls are always so sweet to eachother :)
20kels chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
.amazing.

wow, that was awesome, i love how it started with a message, dang.

great work, keep it up!
ifeeldisplaced chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
So you know how at the end you ask if it's good or horrible? Yeah... I think you should just eliminate the horrible altogether. Because your writing isn't horrible. Ever. This is very good. Really, it is. So yeah... I don't even want to see the word horrible anywhere! in your next fic, got it? Haha, but seriously. I really, really liked this.

-sjane18
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