Reviews for The Deception
katsukiyo chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
This is one of the absolute best NaruSasu stories I've come across in both AO3 and FF! 3 3 I do hope we will see the finish some day.
Arw165 chapter 11 . 5/5/2016
I would be delighted to read the rest of the story. I can only comfort myself that at least you ended your last updated chapter with both of them being safe and together (the last sentence really sounds like ending)
katsukiyo chapter 11 . 4/28/2015
Okay, so the white-haired nobleman was possibly Aoshi's former lover, but what will happen now? Will there be war? What's Naruto and Sasuke's part in it? Where's Kakashi? Will everyone survive? Aaaaaargggh, too mantly questions, just UPDATE ALREADY PLEASE!
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 11 . 5/24/2014
The writing here really is unspeakably beautiful. God, why does it only stop at eleven chapters? *cries*
CoreOfLove chapter 11 . 4/11/2014
Please update it is one of the best Sasuke and Naruto stories I have read and I really want to know how it will end for them! :D
Lady Artemist chapter 11 . 2/22/2014
How I wish you would update this!
zei1827 chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
i really hope there is a sequel! I really love it :)
Guest chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
that was awesome! I'm a fan of a long haired naruto :)
zei chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
oh gosh! That was awesome! I love it! How you turned the loud naruto to a courtesan..the intensity,the mystery that you're made naruto who he was in this story..oh i can't wait to read the next chap!
Kelly185891 chapter 11 . 11/10/2013
Update already! PLEASE!
Killua17 chapter 3 . 10/24/2013
I want to know what happens at the end!
Please update!
The suspense is killing me!
Yuki-kyo-kira chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
I hope the next chapter comes out soon. This is one of my most favorite stories I have read so far!
marietess726 chapter 11 . 7/13/2013
This a really beautiful story. I hope you'd continue with it but it seems that from your profile, this will be the last chapter that i'll get to read. That's too bad

But, really, even though the story is a bit dark for my taste, i would have loved to read the end of it. Maybe someday you'll get the inspiration again to continue with this story but if not, then i still think you did a great job with this story.
Killua17 chapter 11 . 5/20/2013
Can't wit for more. :)
syrraki chapter 11 . 12/28/2012
wow I don't even know what to write in this review your story is AMAZING. I just stumbled on it and I cannot believe I haven't seen it recc'd before! Umm what stood out the most was your writing which is excellent! a really high standard and something you don't see a lot in fanfiction... It seemed like you had a really clear vision of what you wanted to conjure up in the readers' minds and I think you succeeded, even though you introduced plenty of completely original characters, settings and relationships.

I thought you did a great job of characterising all the Naruto characters and your original ones. Naruto and Sasuke of course, but I liked Sakura's little role and Kakashi and Iruka too.

I'm really interested to know how the story would end... What was the true purpose of gathering all those missing nins? What's the deal with Aoshi and his previous lover? Who is the servant that knew Naruto's name? What are the Fire-Wind-Earth country alliance going to do? ALL THESE QUESTIONS AND MORE.

Umm anyway, overall I really enjoyed this story and I'll totally rec it to my friends if they don't mind at story that isn't complete. My favourite parts were... hmm... when Naruto was settling into his role as Daisuke, Sasuke's point of view scenes, when Sasuke challenged the other missing nins to a fight to assess their abilities... There were loads of great parts and the plot just kept moving and developing! It never felt like you were just being overindulgent or letting it stagnate, but instead was very balanced.

Soo... Thanks for writing a great story!
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