Reviews for Oh My Shur'tugal
Galatians 5.24 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Okay. Er. This is quite an odd poem, but it does tell of the story of Eragon. My only comment is that it sounds like an ode or a ballad. It could be improved, but as long as you wrote it with your heart, no reason to get all flustered. :3

Yours,

-C.
Writer of the North chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Nice!