|Reviews for The Fallen goddess|
| Joshua chapter 1 . 4/15
Couldn't even make ot through the first chapter, I hate to put down a writer, but this story is very badly written and just dosen't make sense, if Bella is the daughter of Zeus and Hera SHE WOULD BE A GODDESS NOT A DEMOGOD! AND SHE WOULD BE AS POWERFUL AS ONE OF THE 12, HOW COULD YOU MAKE SUCH A STUPID MISTAKE?
| izzy marie-anna swan chapter 2 . 1/15/2016
I love ur story I hope u make and squel to this story
| Methos Momomax chapter 2 . 12/6/2015
Is Rin a nickname for heather because I'm confused.
| Methos Momomax chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
So is heather daughter of Athena or Demeter? Pretty good start although.
| AmaryllisRoman chapter 2 . 12/3/2015
Why is and I quote "girl with messy brown hair and grayish eyes " a description for Annabeth? Are you basing upon the movie because those facts are all wrong.
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/29/2015
Your Bella is such a very weak person. She didnt have any backbone and a fucking pet. She let the fucking Cullens make decision for her and she listen like a pet. What a weak person. She should grow more backbone and fight back. Fuck the Cullens. I hate them.
| Speedy1106 chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
2 questions, one: Heather is Athena's or Demeters daughter? Two: if Bella is Zeus and Hera's daughter she not a demi-god. She would be a godess.
| BluexPheonix24 chapter 33 . 1/2/2015
Such an amazing story!
| BluexPheonix24 chapter 33 . 12/26/2014
I loved it! You are amazing. Kepp it up
| kellyainsley chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
I'm just a little confused as in places of the story things don't match up. For instance in the first paragraph you've said that Bella is the daughter of Zues and Hera, 2 full gods and 2 of the first gods that started the bloodline at that and yet you call Bella a Demi-god? If she is the daughter of 2 full gods does that not make her a full blooded god and not a Demi-god because she is not the offspring of a human and a god but the offspring of 2 gods instead?
| SeleenaMarieDragonMistress chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
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| CoraPearson chapter 33 . 2/12/2014
that was great x
| Alybethed chapter 10 . 12/30/2013
Edward is being a crazy controlling asshole! I hate that they (the Cullen as a whole) are trying to make decision for her when is not their place to do so...
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Good would be better if Bella was a more emotionally stronger person and not a push over pet
| Valkyrie101 chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
I'm really interested in this story so far, but shouldn't Bella be a full blown God if both of her parents are God's ? She called herself a demigod, though ... so I guess I'm a little confused. Liking the story though :)