|Reviews for Ojamajo Party|
| Mach the Cynic chapter 6 . 10/13/2013
Another suggestion: try creating your own boards. And don't omit the zero flame; that was the best part of Bowser's Pinball Machine.
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/17/2013
Even if you try saying otherwise, this story is still technically a crossover; in this case, with Mario. Why? Because you're using several characters from those games and you're using the same boards in Mario Party DS.
All in all, the story can be summed up as being predictable, boring, and unoriginal. And the presence of a blatant self-insert mary sue hogging the spotlight from the canon characters only makes things worse. There is no possible way for this to be salvaged; your best bet would be to simply remove it and either remake it or never bother with it again.
| trainer bubbkes chapter 6 . 9/1/2012
sooo cool *eyes sparkle in amazementi can't wait for the next chapter XD
| S.P.D. Gold Ranger chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
MARIO PARTY! I haven't played that game in ages. (Last one I played was, I think, Mario Party 4.)
Wonderful job, Meg-chan! Bring on the next chapter!
Time to set sail,
| Rum Tum Tuggette chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
this look interesting! update soon!