if konohamaru's mother was a jinchuriki then it would make sense for him to have whisker's as that was the case for canon naruto,boruto and hemawari. so i will withhold my judgement for it until you tell us ,but good god i know it will not be the case and you just suck at research for your own stories.
you dipshit

the yondaime doesn't really use shunshin, he uses space time ninjutsu with jutsu shiki as the formula for the teleportation is on the 3 pronged kunai of his.
you dumbass. first the uzumaki doesn't have enough chakra then yondaime doesn't have his teleportation. ehat more are you going to just eradicate in terms of your fucking "AU".

that is stupid as naruto is an uzumaki,he should have an enomous amount of chakra. wth man?

I don’t really get the whole I don’t have enough chakra point. Is he an Uzumaki or not, even without kyuubi he should have more chakra than anyone in village, plus it being dense as hell? Without his chakra constantly in fluctuation due to kyuubi he should be spamming jutsu all day long

Read this a few years ago and have found myself coming back to it time and again. Genuinely one of the best fanfictions I think I’ve ever read. Each character is so wonderfully realized, and I love Naruto’s arc. Hope you’re doing well and still writing, I’d love to get another chapter someday (or preferably 30)

Awesome story!

Did i just read two completely different stories? I mean, seriously? Look, you’re a fantastic writer and these fanfictions are yours to do with as you please, but here is some hopefully constructive critisism. Skipping 3? 5? Ish years of critical timeline and plot, that the entire first half of the story built up to through a timeskip and presenting a completely contrary MC with no warning is a jarring experience, and kills motivation to read.

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Shit's going down

This is not a Naruto fanfic. It's an original that draws attention using a well-known fandom.

And hunting the jinchurikis idk man

But dint nagato start the war idk how to feel abot him

Okay, now this one makes NO SENSE... How does naruto NOT know his father after being ALIVE for an ENTIRE year? The clan heads would know him.. Minato's FRIENDS would know him...Minato's enemies would have ALREADY known about him... Hiding him serves NO PURPOSE in this one! It shouldn't even be logically POSSIBLE in fact. Not to mention the only reason the fox could be pulled out of Kushina was because the seal was weakened by childbirth... This is definitely a "shaky start".

I just really have a TOUGH time believing this one... There was a FULL year that naruto was around AND minato and kushina were too... That changes A LOT! Not to mention that Minato was the hokage... EVERYONE would know naruto.. It would be logistically IMPOSSIBLE to hide him, (especially with the name NARUTO UZUMAKI... And his father would have introduced him AS "naruto"... This doesn't make the villagers seem dumb like canon does... This makes them BRAIN DEAD and ALL the ninja ENTIRELY too deaf and blind... It just doesn't work)

Third "secret war"? Um you DO realize these "ninjas" doing ANYTHING "secret" is kinda against everything about them... They are Loud.. They are "emotional", their jutsu reshape entire landscapes..Plus, make more noise then an aircraft carrier taking off... I don't see them doing ANYTHING "secret"... And if it's a BUNCH of them fighting? Ummm.. No.. "secret" should be nowhere in the name.

Ik the story isn’t finished but who’s gonna stop me hope its worth

why do good fics always end up dead and the shitty harem fics get completed (sob...sob)
please continue babe don't turn on us like that after such a wonderful story