|Reviews for Hurricane Suite|
| InARealPickle chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
!Caution!: all that is Epic and Awesome lies within this fic
Man oh man!
Let me just say that as much as I loved everything, my favorite part was Naruto NOT getting a fox or a toad mask.
Yes, I know that it wasn't even a possibility for this for. But that takes nothing away from my joy.
I'm about to rant...
WHY oh WHY can't the hopelessly clueless writers who give Naruto the code name: Fox, see just how cliche that is?
Let me explain why this is so bad.
ANBU complete and total badassery
They DON'T mix!
No. Just no.
| Earthdude chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Wouldn't Naruto be trained to be emotionless if he was in Ne, or just emotional control?
Great chapter, update soon!
| yuseke29 chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Brilliant! This is becoming one of my favorite Naruto fic... Well wrtten and good sense of direction story wise. please update soon.
| Wildfury chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
| Ironman088 chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Hey nice to see you back man. Gottta say man i missed this fic alot. Its always a blast to only negative with this fic is its upload rate, but i wont get on ur case about it because i can only imagine what you have to do day to day (Attending College has put that prospective into me), but anyways i look foward to seeing more of you and ur newset chapter of one of my favorite up and coming fics. Take care
| SergeantMeow chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Great chapter. Your pacing is outstanding, as none of the developments have seemed too fast or too slow coming. Especially in this chapter; with the mention of Naruto's recent growth by "leaps and bounds," it'll be very rewarding to see just how strong he's become when he's forced to face strong opponents. As it stands, you've done well hinting at just how much of a competent shinobi he has become without fully displaying his full prowess. That's a good tactic for increasing anticipation among your readers.
Speaking of anticipation, can't wait to see what it'll be like if/when any of the members of the former Rookie Nine ever encounter Naruto in any sort of combat situation,especially with the superiority complex that a certain few of them seem to possess. I'm not one for character bashing, but I have to admit a guilty pleasure for seeing Sasuke's world view being rocked whenever he finds out that he isn't such hot shit after all. We've already had a taste of that with his brief encounter with Gai's team, but those of his age group never really witnessed his skills first hand. That sort of scene would be especially amusing after this chapter, where it seems at this point that Naruto could most likely hold his own against Kakashi. Doesn't look like there's going to be any chances for Naruto to interact with any of them anytime soon, what with him being shipped off to Kusagakure, but a fan can hope!
Kudos on making Danzo and Sarutobi into grudging friends. Even when you see that in a fic, most of the times they're still plotting at each other behind the other's back. I rather agree with your view, that that relationship works best when they're cooperating in tandem. Both wield enormous politic power, after all, so it's good that they have each other balancing their opposing ideals into something that is altogether beneficiary for the entirety of Konoha, and not just for their particular views. It makes everything run a lot more efficiently, and should add quite a bit to the plot when you have these two powerful people on the same page (especially if Sarutobi ends up getting killed before a successor is named).
In any case, here's to looking forward to an expedient update, because I've really taken a liking to your idea and can't wait to see how the Naruto world is affected. Thanks for sharing your story with us!
| waywas chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
Once again you out done yourself. Great action sequence, superb dialogue and nice strategy.
| ArrancarMaiden chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
I agree with you on Danzo. great chapter
| Kyouzou chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
"At the least, they unually had the good sense not to get caught."
Naruto had no doubt that that fact alone would keep him inside the Hokage's office for far longer than he would have liked.
Typo: Comma between the two 'that' perhaps? I would just reword the entire sentence.
Naruto had no doubt that this alone would keep him inside the Hokage's office for far longer than he would have liked.
Just a suggestion.
Other then those two things, everything seems good, plot seems to be developing nicely and your fights are as crisp as ever. Your take on Danzo and Hiruzen's relationship is one I haven't see yet. Kudos on that.
| Draton chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
I wouldn't say a Danzo/Saru collaberation of sorts has never been done before, its just really rare. ANd is not done nearly enough... Liked this chapter, love Naruto's mask (as its not some horribly cliche thing like Fox, and I love Sharks) keep up the good work
| Demonkid chapter 5 . 9/2/2010
like all the previous chapters. Well Done.
| kihakukage chapter 4 . 8/26/2010
really interesting cant wait to read more
| Earthdude chapter 4 . 8/24/2010
Great chapter, ut why is it that Naruto uses mud clones when he is shown that he can make water out of nowhere and thus can make water clones for less chakra. Just wondering, update soon!
| DerHesse chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
hi great chapter, great concept.
just one minor point I didn't get:
-With (50) of you hear today, that means that only 50 percent of you will pass," Mizuki stated -
-All examinees are to report to a gate in groups of three(3), no more, no less. I trust that you are able to divide yourselves evenly -
sounds petty, I know.
| skepsis66 chapter 4 . 8/23/2010
Two words: Bloody Brilliant!