Reviews for Connors Fall
Jester-Dream chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Oh wow. This is amazing! I read "Perfect" and I think this accurately describes Connor! The funeral scene in that book made me cry!
paperlessprinter chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
You definitely brink up an interesting point with the last 2, or 4 lines.

It's pretty depressing that he knows he's not going to heaven.
lauredward chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
that was deep, man
Crazy-Tea-Addict chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I love the book impulse and this is an awesome little poem and that book made me almost cry when Connor died
ferret assassin nin chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
i like this poem. it's a very interesting subject; what conner was thinking bout his fall. in all honesty, if i didn't know better, i wuld beleive this is part of the book. nicely written as well as the ending word pattern. i like it all round. definitely a fav.

ferret nin
nav'i chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
that was an awesome poem

conner was the best though he shouldn't have died
Captain Torch chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
whoa! This was an amazing poem. Really close to the way Elen Hopkins writes, too! And I loved that you did with the bolded words... "Falling down a rabbit hole of darkness." And then kind of attaching it with the white rabbit? It really seems pro :)

All in all, I loved it!