Reviews for The Making of a Crib
McGonagall25 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
I like it a lot. I thought that it was very good.
Joanne Amelia chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
that's precious :)
lexandraa chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I really liked this! It was cute but not over the top fluff. Realilistic. Good job.

-b3lla
Luna del Cielo chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Goodness, I do love me some Marauder action! :D

Chin up, all of that rot."—nice use of brit slang :)

She was rather large.—hee :)

Watching her smile like that, and reaching out to also feel the vigorous kicking of their baby against the inside of her stomach, deluded him into remembering even the day she'd threw a vase at his head fondly.- Aw

The ‘Mr. Lupin’ triggering his doubts—nicely done! I like that you touched on that briefly.

There was a light pressure on his cheek, a soft hand tilting his face up again. Dora was smiling, "You'll be a great father, Remus. We'll be great parents. Don't worry."

- AW!

Finally~ Yes I DO like it! Very cute and lovely! And all for me so it’s even better ;)

Gracias!

Luna
gredandforge09 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Lovely! Sounds just like them! :D