Reviews for As You Please
DarknekoKurai chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
this is so cute! i love it!
Kame Hime chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Haha! That was SO CUTE! I love the direction you took with this; it wasn't all lovey-dovey, it was humorous, too. The summary had me a little wary, but there was nothing to worry about. :]

I also liked your pacing. It was nice and the wording greatly affected the feel; at P.M.S. I could already hear the foreboding music. XD

Great grammar, great ending, great story! Keep up your GREAT writing! :D
Uncoloured186 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
I can see that he was teasing her~ XD
CrescentMoon760 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
hahaha! thats so funny! it was awesome!
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Funny... his answer was pretty good... but hey when we are pmsing there is no right answer. lol
MoonPrincess1989 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I loved it! It was fantastic!
Tsuzuki105 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Ahaha! That was great. I thought for a second that it would be sad but no. This was cute and I liked it a lot. I loved that he ran away without running. And to the bathroom no less. That made the entire short. Good job.
clara954 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
This is really cute! I like the double meaning. Keep writing!
Restless Wanderer chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
lol pms ahaha good story