Reviews for Heatstroke
Kunoichi Akane chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
I absolutely loved this!
Your writing is amazing and the story's progression was perfect. I really liked how they got a happily ever after even before the story really began when Garra decided to have Lee go back to Sauna with him for a couple of years. Everything just came full circle seamlessly in the cutest, most intense scenes I have ever read. Very excellent work.
PastaU chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Amazing! Really good story, nicely written and simply... hot! I love it!
Carmelita28 chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Thank you very much for that lovely one shot I really enjoyed reading it. You stayed true to their personalities and made it so realistically believable I find myself wanting more
Thank you for sharing your story
Colbie Caprice chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
I really loved it! I love when Gaara is pictured that way: solemn, not really expressive but still cute, hihi!

Thanks for this one-shot,

Reveriemare chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
If that's how drabbles turn out to be, you should definitely write some more!
I've honestly never read an awkward sex scene that was that adorable and awesome all in one, thank you for writing this! How Gaara responded to Lee's reaction to Gaara's body and everything in between, just... wow! Realy, really wow! :) I hope you'll write some GaaraLee drabbles soon!
AwesumBananas chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
*release of the high pitch fangirl squeal*
Anonymous is a pretty bad name chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
The best and most adorable bit of pr0n I've read in a while! ;D
BlackMetalHeart chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Great story!

I noticed that you don't have any way for me to pm you on your profile so I'm just going to ask you this here... Would you be willing to write a Kakashi/Gai story?
Stina Whatever chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This is a great one-shot, and Gaara's really cute, and so's Lee.
Ligeta-Chan chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
That was probably the longest one-shot I have ever read.. O.O BUT IS WAS SO AWESOME! :D I wonder though how Gaara's face looked during them sexy intercourse.. :P..*dreamy sigh* Gods, this coupling was writen so hot and steamingly great that it's going straight to my favorites! Keep writing like this and I shall become your minion ala reviewer! :D Perfect!xxx
MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Step by step, yoai lemon that was very in character.
Safiiri chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Scarily accurate imo :) Loved it :)
ajunkboat chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
wow this story was beautifully written. so sweet and innocent and HOT xD i love how you portrayed Lee and Gaara, they are both so cute and sweet! Lee being all embarrassed and flustered and Gaara being curious and well... Gaara xD great story :)
fuu09 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
best scene ever when lee tries to explain his attraction to gaara xD i lol'd. thought it was cute how gaara shut em up at the end 3
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Huh. Well, congratulations! You wrote a piece of smut that didn't give me the urge o bang my head against the wall in response to all teh phail. XD Really, you did manage to miss most of the cliches, and I thought that the "hands-on sex ed" was funny in a weird way.
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