|Reviews for Mrs Cullen and the Chicago Outfit|
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/4
Wonderful story...thank you for the journey
| StelenaClaceLover09 chapter 16 . 12/3/2016
i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward together
| jk chapter 12 . 5/12/2016
wow she accepted that he cheated on her pretty fucking easily...I mean he already said that he was falling in love with her...then he kisses another woman and lets said woman touch his dick...and bellas cool with that...
bella forgives this prick waaaay to easy
and he never explained why he was in the bathroom with lauran for 30 minutes
| jk chapter 11 . 5/12/2016
I thought she went over there to tell him that she targeted him...not to jump onto the worlds dirtiest dick...so fucking gross
| JK chapter 10 . 5/12/2016
well now were up to ...
Tanya (made out with)
Jessica Stanley and her made up sister...really mother fuck gross
| jk chapter 9 . 5/12/2016
does it matter that Edward ends up loving bella?
hes made out with TANYA
fucked LAURAN MALLORY
FUCKED VICTORIA and shared irina and Victoria with james!
omg, this is one of the grossest Edwards ive ever read...sooooo mother fucking nasty
how about bella cleans her pussy out with bleach...then hits her head and forgets how gross she is now that's shes been on Edwards dick and moves on to JAKE
| jk chapter 9 . 5/12/2016
jesus...Tanya, lauran and now irina and Victoria too? you gonna have him fuck his way through the skanks of twilight? wtf?
and he cheated on bella, so game over...bella can leave his nasty ass now
| jk chapter 7 . 5/12/2016
bella knows hes nasty skank...rose fucking told her when this whole thing started so I don't get why shes being fucking stupid now
| jk chapter 5 . 5/12/2016
I'm not gonna lie...its super fucking gross that Edward has been with so many woman he cant even count them...but we can cant we? he said he lost his virginity at 16 and he hasn't gone more then a few weeks without sex. He said that hes a hit it and quit it type so I'm guessing not a lot of repeats...so lets do the math shall we...I girl every 3 weeks sound right to you writer/? cause that's what you said... that's about 208 woman. TWO HUNDRED AND EIGHT...SOOOO MOTHER FUCKING GROSS..theres NO WAY hes never had a std
| jk chapter 4 . 5/12/2016
keep it on the dessy side? whats dessy? like classy or something?
and Edward didn't say he was clean bella! he said he thought he was cause he always uses condoms...that doesn't mean shit...you can get herpes, genital worts and crabs while using a perfectly working condom!
| jk chapter 3 . 5/12/2016
bella doesn't seem to have her shit together...when does she get the money,how does she receive it...why in the fuck did t she ask? she needs to pay off charlies debts...I THOUGHT THIS WAS LIFE OR DEATH?
you've already made a joke out of that since instead if trying to save her ass she got wasted
| jk chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
sad that Edwards a gross whore...and stupid to boot.
I'm disappointed that bella is so fucking stupid...this is her mothr fucking life, she needed to get that money so she made her plan...then gets wasted? dumb bitch
| Princess Drama Queen chapter 16 . 12/27/2015
The feels with this story! Argh- perfection. Just work on your and you're please. This story kept me up all night, each chapter hooking me in further. Thank you!
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/30/2014
| hairline chapter 16 . 1/20/2014
Wow what a brilliant story