Reviews for Secret Sex
KManzie chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
Omg. I love this, please continue. Hope you update soon, though you just updated today lol. Can't wait!
PiedPiperOSIB chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
The first two chapters were...HOT! You have to continue this story! If this is any indication on what you have planned for the later chapters of ACE then by all means keep practicing (and I will forgive you for all of the emotional cliff hangers ACE has) Plus, I am dying to find out what the family thinks.

-Chris
ColourmeCullen chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
Oh woman, that has to have been the most innocent, sensual, painfully beautiful, virginal scene I think I've ever read. So, so well written!

I love these two, and I think it'd be awesome if you continued this! 3
Renee chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
This is great. Please keep going!
ColourmeCullen chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
lmao - that was awesome. Loved that he got his even though she didn't - and great inspiration for ACE! ;)
SabLuvsLogan chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
YAY! I love how your defining a o/s haha that was a great surprise alert, please pulease continue it..loving it! Fingers crossed for another update

~GGSophie
hayley chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
wow please update soon that was fantastic and very very hot !
PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
OMG, OMG THIS WAS THE BIGEST TURN IN A LONG WHILE SO HOT I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE SO WHEN DO YOU PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER I AM SURE I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE THAT WANTS IT NOW.
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Oh honey, you don't have to practice - you've done a great job here! But if you feel you must hone your skills, I will not protest. I probably say this too much, but you need to write more of this - and by "this" I mean both this little story and the smut that goes along with it! I'm back to reading you on Twilighted because you never know when you might disappear but thought I'd comment since I was here.

I really love the part that goes..."As much as I needed my own release, I loved this woman in ways I had not even acknowledged to myself because the sheer depths of my emotions scared the shit out of me…I desperately wanted her to climax, she deserved it."

That's what gets me...the emotions behind the sex - and that will always be hotter than two people just screwing.
4natelaft chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
That was great..I'm glad she actually wears is funny telling Edward what they if more update soon
SabLuvsLogan chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Loves it! Bloody hot girlie :D

~GGSophie
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