Reviews for The Rough Fist
blasterdog chapter 17 . 10/23
Great fic
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23
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Guest chapter 17 . 5/1
When is the next chapter
kimi chapter 9 . 3/30
basically a story where naruto is whining like shit... a boring dissappointment.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/21
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Naruto does not live in the slums. You must have mistook him for your whore mommy.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/5/2016
Exam5806020
Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2016
Good
mdhunter111 chapter 17 . 6/21/2016
Nice job with this chapter and story so far! Please continue with the next one soon. Looking forward to it, and have a nice day!
Kairan1979 chapter 11 . 4/20/2016
It's a shame the story wasn't updated.
Naruto developing his own style and trained under Utakate is interesting.
Annabell242 chapter 17 . 4/10/2016
more?
Annabell242 chapter 4 . 4/9/2016
i say all 4 of my votes for hinata to help guarantee her spot (even though i know the fick is dead i just felt like putting my 2 cents in )
zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 7 . 12/29/2015
It's not takegakeru it's takigakure
Onikai Yoko chapter 10 . 3/16/2015
My only complaint is that you keep spelling gakure as gakaru. Gakure is meant to refer to has hidden in. So Idk what that gakaru thing is that you keep using. Anyways, really nice chapter. Idk if you'll respond to this but I hope you update soon.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/23/2014
she was 3 watch the anime neji says it was her third birthday
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