|Reviews for Witfit Prompt Entries|
| romanceaholic chapter 5 . 3/24/2010
#4 Bella is upset because she hung out with Jacob while Edward was always away on business. Edward wanted explanation. Bella explained and Edward forgave her and promised to never leave her again. How sweet and forgiving.
#5 Bella and Edward are best friends. Bella is 6 and Edward is 7. Bella is spending the night over at the Cullens. Bella and Edward built a fork out of blankets/sheets and furniture to sleep. Bella got the munchies and asked about their midnight snack. Edward took her into kitchen. She wanted popcorn and chocolate. They were on the top shelf too high for either to reach. Edward had a wonderful idea, I'll hold Bella up to reach the cabinet. The items were in the back of the shelf, when she reached for it, she lost her balance and Edward caught her and both went crashing to the floor. Neither were hurt, but both admitted they loved each other. What a great friendship and a wonderful foundation for their future.
| romanceaholic chapter 3 . 3/15/2010
Great beginning for a story. Meeting on a moving train. Talk about really falling for a guy. Thank goodness Edward was so strong to hold Bella to prevent her falling to the ground. A great way to become better acquainted 20 questions. Learn a lot about each other and pass the time on a boring train.
| bizarre.ponies chapter 3 . 3/15/2010
Aw! So cute :)
| romanceaholic chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
Sad that Bella doesn't believe Edward loves her. He is not just saying that to her. He means it, she just doesn't believe him. He is saving her from James and all his torture methods and cruelty. Hope some day Bella will trust in Edward to move forward and believe him.
| sugarlipswhoatecandy chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Are you going to update? i hope you do, because i really liked this story, and loved the kiss at the end! i hope you update!
| romanceaholic chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Are you planning on expanding this story? What happens after the kiss? One of them says, "wow." Where will it go from there? Hoping you continue with this story.