Reviews for Feuer und Wasser
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Disclaimer: yep, I know this fic is two years old and you've probably forgotten it exists :p

But I absolutely love this. It's clever, detailed writing and works extraordinarily well, and I say this as someone who generally dislikes any more than two paragraphs in a row. The authorial "which I have decided to name Scimitar" doesn't really work for me, but your mileage may vary. It's also very evocative writing, and some of your imagery is fantastic, especially in the first paragraph.

I did notice that there were some spelling and punctuation errors:

- "A Daggerwrist hones its infamous weapons,"
- "The Rayback, which is referred to by..."
- "He defecates on..."
- "He stamps off,"
- Harlequin is the affectionate name..."
- Turquoise
- Dances off
- Gelatinous
- Wherever