Reviews for His Brown Eyes
PlatoOfAncientRoam34 chapter 4 . 4/13
Best Devlin story I've read so far, awesome stuff Bro! XD
PlatoOfAncientRoam34 chapter 2 . 4/13
This is really well done, nice job
chimera629 chapter 4 . 3/16/2016
Wow so well written and absolutely believe able
chimera629 chapter 3 . 3/16/2016
Okay now I'm really starting to wonder what happened
chimera629 chapter 2 . 3/16/2016
So why did Kevin end up in the void and is he power mad
chimera629 chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Why was Devlin in the null void and who is his mom
That One Bright Star chapter 4 . 2/9/2016
Omg this is it?! *cries* I thought it was something longer! Right in the feels
Xflasher01 chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
I'm the guest that just reviewed by the way.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/7/2015
Great story. I liked how you combined the 10,000 universe with the main one.
Aivlyz chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
-claps with teary eyes- Beautiful, mate, just- just, beautiful... I loved how you could write so well and the way you elaborated everything- it wasn't too draggy nor too straight forward; I thought the consistency of the story was perfect. I liked the whole plot, it was very well built and everything but, I wish there was a prologue for this; I'd really be looking forward to see who Devlin's real mother is... Or maybe Kevin created him? But, seriously, this was really good. Keep up your great work!
Bridget chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
That was hands down one of the saddest stories I have ever read. Perhaps its because I love Ben 10 and I absolutely love angsty Gwevin, but the story itself was very well written. You managed to build complex realistic characters in only four pages! AND you plotted a heart wrenching love story without ever bringing one of the lovers into the script! Do not ever stop writing. I will be back for more
TheCaramelSecrets chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
Wow- cool story! Ugh, too tired to say more, but I really enjoyed it!
ghibli3624 chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Wow great story and very nice plot twist.
ghibli3624 chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Wow great story and very nice plot twist.
JustDanny chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
So great!
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