Reviews for As The Storm Breaks
ahealthyaddiction chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
UGH. Holy endearing. You are killing me tonight. After (IMHO) lukewarm season 5 finale, your short stories are like a warm fire. Thank you!
Hikari-Kayko chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
aw. that was sweet. with just a little spice to make it tasty. _ very nice.

~HIKARi
hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
ah so lovely!

As they silently blot themselves, he tries not to notice the way her soaked blouse clings to her figure. He tries not to notice… He's a gentleman, after all. But damn it, he's a guy too. And there are some things a guy can't help but notice.

i just LOVE the distinct difference between being a gentleman and being a guy. you write it so well.
Alanna1231 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Love, love, love this story, Jess.

I fully believe there's nothing sexier than a thunderstorm, and when you combine it with a wet Booth and Brennan, it's even more so!

"She smirks. "I doubt you've ever questioned your manhood, Booth." She gestures at his belt buckle."

LMAO. I seriously doubt he has either. Good catch there, Brennan. ;)

"Distracted, his hands begin to slow, his purposeful touch unconsciously turning into a soft caress."

This line seriously gave me chills. I can see the image of Booth and his large hands running up and down her arms softly. Beautiful.

Excellent story, m'dear!
BuckandWanda chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Aww, i love the way you write. Especially the fact that you always ahve them in charcter, it makes a story so mcuh more enjoyable to read (in my opinion) if you can really imagine it happening on the show. Thanks for this awesome work. Can't wait fro more. Particularly like the language in this, it's so sweet and tender, the way things should be. Love your Work EM
jacklynvt11 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
That was awesome. Loved it. Very cute to read. Nice work. :)
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Hi there,

Oh how wonderful...This was a beautiful chapter...

'As they silently blot themselves, he tries not to notice the way her soaked blouse clings to her figure. He tries not to notice… He's a gentleman, after all. But damn it, he's a guy too. And there are some things a guy can't help but notice'...

And how she notices him too...Loved...

'Instinctively, she knows he's thinking about kissing her and in the past, this would have terrified her. But right now, in this moment? There's nothing in the world she wants more. She only hopes he can see it in her face'...

Really loved this chapter...

Ger
bearlee-there chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
This made me very, very happy today. So beautifully written. So perfectly in character. The storm - just the right thing to frame this piece.

Excellent. Thank you for posting.
Addicted2Castle chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Very sweet one! I loved it very much!

Loved the humour in the beginning especially about Booth' cocky belt buckle...very funny! And I loved how they watched each other - cute.
DaLiza chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
So sweet and hot at the same time-loved it!
206 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Nice! Good job :)
RowdyRomantic chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Beautiful!
dizzy - in - the - izzy chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I could have sworn I wasn't logged in...

Anywho, I think I LOVE THIS MORE THAN I LOVE JOHN CHO. (Btw, I love John Cho with my whole heart). But, I LOVE THIS! It's incredibly written, and beautifully so. The detail, the passion, the utter feelings I can take from it. I was trembling and giggling at Booth keeping Bones warm.

I could express my more love, but my vocab is not large enough. & I believe swear words are NOT a good way to express love.