Reviews for Before My Eyes
hopelina chapter 1 . 3/29
The ending gave me shivers. I almost cried. This story is fantastic.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22

Thank you for this gorgeous story. Very well written, and love the plot.
crying clack fam chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
In the middle of the story I realized that maybe this is one of those "your whole life" stories... starting when Cloud was born, when Zack and Cloud met, up until their deaths. At first I thought it would be a happy ending but NOOOOOOO! I was crying so bad at the end of this (beautiful) fic that when I looked in the mirror I looked like hell. Well, even if it was a very sad ending, I'd be happy imagining how they're doing there in the Lifestream :3
Last and Alone chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
You are one of the authors that take the world as it is and paint it onto a canvas in such a beautiful, painstakingly simple way, it reduces me to tears. Even simple phrases ("with nothing but each other and the sun") make my heart throb in a way I can't even describe. You've given me an entirely new perspective on humanity and life and /love/, and I might sound overly dramatic, but this story has changed my life.
I sit here quietly and listen to my tears hit the tabletop.
midguardians chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Owwwwwww. This was painful to read. Faving it when I can make an account, and I have already shared it with several friends. If I'm going down, I'm dragging them with me.

... if you'll excuse me, I have some dust in my eye.
Koshka Rayn chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
God damn it whyyyy?! WHY?
Oh, it was so sweet and so sad and and and oooohhhh damn it, why? You made me cry! There's only one other story I've read on this site that made me bawl like that, and damn, you made me cry.
But thanks for the read, that really was a lovely story :)
Darkflower123 chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Therius chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
This oneshot physically hurts me.

It started out really cute and funny and then it got really sad ;_;
xxxPoppy chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
No no NO! Stop it! Stop it right now! There's too many feels! This was possibly the happiest, funniest, saddest story I've ever read ever. This is a work of art and it's 4:09 am and I'm crying in bed reading this. Good job, I'm going to look at what else you have!
Anji chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
It was beautiful and so, so sad towards the end but I love how the love between Zack and Cloud was so pure. They were just two men but seriously, it made me cry. Life wasn't perfect but they lived each day to the fullest and that was what made this story so wonderful!xD Amazing!o
vid-gamer-of-Hyrule chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
My god, that was beautiful. I'm not usually one for slice-of-life stories, but the scores me reviews and amount of favorites got me curious. I'm glad I took the chance to read this. I really, really loved it and how it pulled so many emotions out of me. Definitely well worth the read.
memories.of.rain chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Oh my goodness, this is one of the best Clack AU stories I've ever read! *wipes tears away* Your writing style is brilliant, I like the characterization you put into everyone's actions. *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* OUTSTANDING JOB! :D
Galenchia chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Did you just write out their entire lives perfectly? Damn you, author. Damn you.
I loved it. Great writing.
joy chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
The end made me cry so much omg, this is beauriful, sad but very, very beatutiful.
Midori Ookami chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
You made me cry! Horrible person... I'm still favoriting it though and am going to read it again! :,D
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