|Reviews for Before My Eyes|
| Galenchia chapter 1 . 2/12
Did you just write out their entire lives perfectly? Damn you, author. Damn you.
I loved it. Great writing.
| joy chapter 1 . 1/12
The end made me cry so much omg, this is beauriful, sad but very, very beatutiful.
| Midori Ookami chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
You made me cry! Horrible person... I'm still favoriting it though and am going to read it again! :,D
| eragon456 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
That was the single most beautiful thing I have read ever.
| Sinful-Metaphor chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
I can't believe you did this to us. Without the slightest warning even! Kill me now! I want to hug you and kiss you and punch you - how rude, please forgive me. But I'm just so sad :(
This was one of most beautiful things I've ever read, and probably the very best one in the Clack fandom - no kidding. I laughed so hard and then smiled like a sucker, I teared up from happiness and I cried... I bloody cried, I can't believe this. I'll just go ahead an add you to my favorite authors list, I hope it's okay.
And please, if you ever publish any original of yours, do PM because I'll be damned if I lose track of a writer who makes me look like this - not that you can see the state I'm in now, thank god.
I love these guys too much though, it's not good for me' health. It's quite exasperating to think you just killed them off like that... :( I still love you for writing such a magnificent piece though 3
| shiarein chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
This is so sad and beautiful
| SinaBrosLN chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
That was the most beautiful thing I have ever read D: You are very talented. Keep up the great work! :)
| ElysianEase chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Okay, so, first of all, HOW DARE YOU?
THESE ARE REAL FUCKING TEARS POURING FROM MY EYES, SOAKING MY PILLOW, BLURRING THESE WORDS I AM TYPING.
I started this fic thinking, "Eh, a bit lengthy, but why the heck not, it's interesting." And then I kept reading, thinking, "Aw, childhood romance, Awwww, highschool sweethearts, AWWWWW, they adopted Denzel, this fic is so cute and perfect."
And then YOU DID THE THING.
WITH THE GEOSTIGMA. HOW COULD YOU?! And then CLOUD. MOTHERFUCKING CLOUD, ZACK'S SOULMATE?! OH, THE DYING WHALE NOISES I MADE WHEN HE DIED, YOU HAVE NO IDEA.
AND THEN ZACK, DYING IN THE RAIN. WAS THAT FREAKING NECESSARY?! I'M LITERALLY LYING IN A POOL OF TEARS RIGHT NOW AND I REFUSE TO MOVE BECAUSE I HEARD ONCE THAT YOU CAN DROWN IN A TEASPOON OF WATER AND I'M COUNTING ON IT TO PUT ME OUT OF MY FREAKING MISERY I HATE YOU EVEN AS I'M ADDING THIS STORY TO MY FAVORITES RIGHT NOW CONGRATULATIONS YOU'VE OFFICIALLY CONVERTED ME TO THIS PAIRING AND LIVING LIFE RIGHT NOW IS QUITE BEYOND ME.
GOOD DAY TO YOU, SIR!
| Lady Lazy chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Oh, my God. That was amazing. I cried at the end, when everyone died. It was just- you just did SO amazing wit this story; I can't even tell you.
| OogaBooga1234 chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Tearjerker if I ever read one. Even now my eyes are blurry! Such a good, sweet little story. I love how deep you've gone into their relationship :)
| draco'sfairmaiden chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
That was really sweet!
This is one of the few Final Fantasy AU that I love. It was great reading about their relationship through start to finish. Clack is a beautiful relationship in general- and this is coming from someone who doesn't like yaoi that much. It was great that Zack eventually moved on past Cloud and Denzel's deaths.
Like I said, this was a really sweet fic!
| Bubblegumhairedmonster chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Oh man. This was...unexplainably well-written. The emotions that you conveyed in this story were conveyed so excellently that I can't help but give you a round of applause. Even though I kind of hate you right now for making me cry at freaking 11:30 at night (I'll probably have puffy eyes tomorrow), I have to say that this was really enjoyable for me, and it actually showed me what true love is, and dammit, I'm choking up again. My heart hurts right now because of this fic and I'm truly thankful that I stumbled upon it.
I hate how their son dies, I hate how it takes Cloud next, I hate how Zack suffered for five years, and I hate that I went from laughing to crying while reading. But in the end, all I can say is that no matter how much I loath this story for all its passionate, unwarranted character deaths, it's all very down-to-earth and true. So I want to say, "Thank you. For all your hard work and for making me cry."
| Tohka-Chan chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Why must Cloud die..they shall live happy forever after..TT
Anyway...I love,love,love,love,love,love,love and LOve this fan-fic too much!
| Sayonara7 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I should have known when I started reading this that it was going to end in all that tragedy and angst. Out of the vast amount of fanfiction I've read, this is the second one to make me cry a storm! The tail you wove in those 15 000 words was beautiful and I love how you pulled it off. I usually don't like the method of telling a whole life in a fic (It can turn out really cheesy) but the way you presented it, wrote about it and the contents was amazing! I highly enjoyed it, even if it quite literally caused me to bawl into my pillow for half an hour.
It didn't help that I read this at 4AM and had to smother y tears though XD Thank you so much for this beautiful Clack fic! This is definitely going to become one of my constantly re-read fanfics (Well, I'll only read this one when I wanna cry xD) just from it's sheer amazing-ness. You're a spectacular author!
| Raincloud97 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Oh my gosh. This was amazing. Simply amazing. And it was so sad! I almost cried when Cloud died! But really, great job : )