|Reviews for With or Without You|
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/1
This has been too happily ever after for chapters now. Edwards a douche, hes got baggage, and an ex wife...errrrr kinda hate him.
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/29
In chapter 20 Edward says that he feels something between them, something that he doesn't always feel with someone else.
All I heard was that he HAS felt that way with other people. My suggestion Edward? Go find one of those other women. Bella wasn't good enough for your youth. But she can have you in your used up older years? She can have you when you have a kid and fucking divorce under your belt? Nah, fuck you Edward!
I want Bella with Garrett. Edward can have the Denali whore.
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/29
I feel like Bella has been very fair with her thoughts on Tanya throughout, but theres still this air ...like she thinks Tanya is over reacting or something. I think Tanyas points are valid. It sounds like Edward is never there, so why in the fuck would she want more kids? So she can raise them herself? I think not.
And Bella is super pathetic, not really getting involved with Garrett because shes really waiting for Edward. Hate that. Lets face it Bella, Edward didn't break up with you so he could "do his own thing." He totally broke up with you so he could flirt and screw with anyone whenever he wanted, regardless of what he says the reason.
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/29
I think Edward can go fuck himself. I wouldn't even talk to any of them. Let alone let their spawn in my house. Alittle cruel? Yup, but I'm ok with that.
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/29
At the very end of chapter 5 you say ". . .should've have been the one carrying..."
should've have? LOL
| mounds01 chapter 34 . 8/31
I loved this story, you did a great job!
| MamaJoyof3 chapter 1 . 8/2
| DMBSJB8 chapter 34 . 6/14
I don't know how I missed this one. I've read all your stories, but not this one!
Anyways, a couple of years ago this story would have seriously made me mad. Edward would have had zero redeeming qualities and I would have been cheering for Garrett.
But I've learned a lot as I've gotten older. Teenagers are idiots. And they do stupid irrational things all the time. My 18 yo sister just broke up with her boyfriend right out of high school for basically the same reason. She wanted to experience life. Sure Edward should have had a hella lot more tact. And it was weird that he went from the promise ring to breaking up so quick. But man, teenage boys are dumb. Haha! Anyways, I'm glad that Edward for Jaime and Bella for Sophie. I'm glad that Bella also got Jake. Life is so dang weird and this story showed that perfectly! Thanks for that!
| MaineMomma chapter 31 . 4/3
I liked this chapter because I have been asking myself all along if I could be with someone who destroyed my trust in them like Edward did to Bella. It would make me super insecure and probably angry with him a lot when I felt that way. For me, I don't know if I could have a healthy relationship with him. It was nice to hear Alice bring up the same questions I had about how Bella could take him back. Her explanation made sense but she's way more adult than I think I could be. But I've never been in her unique position, so you never know unless you've walked a mile in her shoes, so to speak.
| jk chapter 6 . 3/15
Edward left bella...and is now married to tanwhore...and has a fucking kid? I bet he was cheating on bella back then too huh?...if he wasn't cheating he was wanting too!
how about Edward can go fucking himself cause NO ONE wants bella to have to play step mommy to tanwhore and Edward fucking spawn..
and sophie is a horrible name ...so stuck up
| mytwilightaddiction chapter 34 . 3/11
I didn't know how I missed this story, I thought I read all of yours lol.. awesome love it... thanks :)
| myadryk89 chapter 34 . 2/21
Such a sweet story. I love the feeling it gave me both of Bella's loves; Bella & Jacob, and Bella & Edward, and that is a rare thing to experience while reading any story.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us. You're awesome.
| Mtg526 chapter 34 . 12/5/2016
Awesome story, but I have to admit what it was also heartbreaking. It's so sad that Edward and Bella lost so much time together. Then I was sad for Edward and Jaime and their situation...even if I was thankful that Edward and Bella seemed as if they'd work out. Thanks so much for writing!
| jk chapter 20 . 9/18/2016
that comment bella made in chapter 20 is just so fucking stupid. She said that Edward was the safest bet because he has already done the "worst" thing he could do.
If he threw her away before, after fucking proposing...I realllllllllly don't think that hes the fuckin safe bet. Garrett was the safe bet! Edward can go fucking suck rocks
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/18/2016
no he really has no fucking right!
its like, ohhhh you want bella NOW? Now that you had years to fuck around with all the college whores and NOW that your wife left your ass...NOW you want bella? seriously?
he would have been happy if tanwhore was pregnant just alittle while ago, he would have been happy to live a life with Tanya...but because Tanya left he wants bella.
Bella is second choice...