|Reviews for The Message of Mistletoe|
| LEPrecon elf holly short chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
Aww I love the banter! You did really great. Properly written even though Lily sounds a bit weird. I know she's drunk and all, but not every word she said would be clipped. Anyway, good work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
Quite near the end there was a typo, it switched to first person instead of third. It should be lily said instead of I said.
Otherwise, lovely story
| florafaunamerryweather chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
I WAS GIGGLING LIKE A FIVE YEAR OLD DURING THIS ENTIRE FIC
AND THEN THAT ENDING
YOU LITERALLY MADE MY CHRISTMAS
AND IT'S THE MIDDLE OF MAY
| not used anymore sorry chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
| dispassioneight chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Honestly this is the most depressing fluff piece ever. It's not even really funny.
Guy crushes on girl for years, he invites her to a game, she kisses everyone but him. She then deigns to hit on him after blatantly slapping him in the face? Fuck that, I couldn't do it, drunk or not. Sadness destroys libido.
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Your stories are brilliant and this one is very good too. Excellent one.
But don't know why got a bit irritated with Lily in this one, she is being a bit of a bitch to James. I shouldn't say this but she irritated me a little sorry.
| jilyspottering chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
| Hana chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Poor James, poor Lily, and the games they play with each other's minds. And you tell it all so perfectly. Thank you so much, B.C Daily, for being amazing and giving me Jily.
| Jenny chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This is my first review for you but I just want to let you know that I'm a huge fan. I'm sure you get this a lot but your writing is just fantastic. The most giddying and lovely writing I've ever seen done unprofessionally. Love you and I CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter of Commentarius! Keep being unbelievably fantastic!
| skies-R-Blue chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I love this it was so funny and all the characters were good as well! ;) xxxxxx
| qd3.14 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Haha best ending ever
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Lol! Love it. Such a funny story. Brilliant. So wish you'd continue into Christmas day! So much hilarity and wit mixed up with perfect mixed up LJ! Amazeballs! I don't know why I'm saying that weird word but you inspired me!
| thewitchisdead chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Bee your one shots are always the best, i absolutely adore them. Fun, hot, exciting, Jily
this was perfect
| anavihs chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
*dead* "I'm not wearing a bra!"
LOVED IT! T'was EPIC! :) HAHAHA! Lily got her fair share of ALL the marauder boys, huh? ;) Lol!
Lots of love
| De1eted Acc0unt chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Um yeah. Lily's a little- a lot- psyco! And it was just so perfect :).