|Reviews for Revealed|
| Shiraishi chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
I love the idea of Gordon unmasking wounded Bruce and then letting him go. I really do.
But chest wound and cardiac arrest are both too severe for Bruce (yes, even Bruce) to sit up and walk away, and for Gordon to allow this without any attempt to stop him, if only to find some other solution.
I'm really sorry if I offended you, but would you consider changing Bruce's injury to something less severe? It would make for much more realistic fell of an already very nice idea. :D
| Serpentinia Malfoy chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
love it ! (Can you make a ch.2?)
| Emily chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
I like it! It's a very realistic way that Gordon might find out! D