|Reviews for Broken Seals, Second Chances|
| snorlax285 chapter 9 . 8/7
You know you are the first Person to change the name of the bridge after Kaiza instead of Naruto. Never crossed my mind awesome story so far.
| Rasengalia chapter 18 . 6/24
Sorry to see this story be abandoned. I really enjoyed it. Hope to see you continue writing someday.
| Gyromon chapter 18 . 6/10
this story is awesome. its cool that you did this story dude I'm not mad at all. thanks for the time and effort you put into this story.
| LogicalPremise chapter 18 . 5/18
You do good work and your writing is both solid and entertaining.
That being said, I don't blame you. Kishamoto is nuts.
| W01frunn3r chapter 5 . 4/22
I do not know if you noticed, however in this chapter Naruto asked what she was talking about with scroll and kunai when he made the same statement 2 chapters before. Otherwise a great read so far.
| RinneTaicho chapter 4 . 3/9
I must say, I am pleasantly surprised. You took a step in the direction of bashing last chapter, but this chapter instead of intensifying you seem to have dialed back into portraying a more cannon characterization of Sakura (can't really speak to Sasuke because he wasn't really present). I'm really glad I continued reading, because this is a very good story you have going. I can't wait to see what the next fourteen chapters have in store.
| RinneTaicho chapter 2 . 3/9
I'm going to continue reading for now, but hopefully the bashing doesn't get any worse. I have to say, I'm more than a little disappointed by it. The story was going pretty good up until that point; bashing is just a major turn off for me.
| Nerfhearder69 chapter 18 . 2/25
| Sakihinata chapter 5 . 2/20
Hana's an awesome sensei ;)
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/7
this is a great story please keep writing more
| Necrogod chapter 18 . 12/14/2017
Thanks for the story short and cut but is one of my best readings so far...
| Astroman1000 chapter 18 . 12/12/2017
My heart hurts... but such is life. Thank you for what it was.
| Bearmauls chapter 5 . 12/3/2017
Naruto used the scroll/kunai example in his team intro speech. For him to not understand the significance of Sakura's statement seems like a pretty significant continuity error. Also, seems a bit sudden for Sakura to think of Naruto as 'friend'. I can see it getting there, but she was calling him an idiot and shouting just last chapter. Overall, I liked the chapter, but jumping straight from the beginning of their forced roommate situation to the end rather skipped all the character development I wanted to see. Where was the hilarious bed situation? The gradual change in dynamic towards friendship and all that jazz? Don't skip that, write that! :)
| DraconesUzumaki chapter 18 . 11/28/2017
Thank you for the time, effort, and imagination yo have given to all of us. It is a wonderful story, and I wish it could continue, but I also understand that one cannot force the creative process, for it is perfect imperfection.
Keep on writing,
| loneknight1012 chapter 18 . 11/27/2017
sad to see it end.