this chapter is lovely but the next one is even more beautiful and heart warming. keep writing. :)

I love you story. It is very heart warming. Of all the stories I have read this story is probably the best. It is so beautiful how you express the depth of love and bond between the siblings.

there was a line in one of my favorite movies- "the bond between the brothers is the sword that defends our empire" I loved that line and this story has almost the same touch as that dialogue had.

I really love your story and the line-"only when you are supported by the Just, comforted by the Gentle, and guided by the Valiant." is really touching. Please write more.

GREAT STORY!

love the how you showed the bond of the Pevensie children and included Aslan and his love in the story as well. well done. i like to look as the bond between Peter and Susan and Edmund and Lucy as just a close family bond instead of incest so really love their love for each other very sweet and Caspian's part in this as well he's very modest and open. amazing job portraying each character.