Reviews for While The Cats Away The Mice Will Play
Lilith chapter 3 . 3/27/2011
Edward comes through this looking pretty cool; believing his girlfriend. Edward/Bella might be the pairing. I would not say it was humorous or romantic, and this is "Jasper bashing", not Jasper/Bella romantic pairing.

When Edward leaves Bella in the woods with no concern for her safety and Jasper rescues her; that is a Jasper Bella pairing and "Edward bashing".
LookOutShe'sGottaKeyboard chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
love it please update soon:)
jazzers chapter 3 . 8/6/2010
awwwww edward should find her then beat jasper up
wendy1969 chapter 3 . 6/10/2010
wow. different. thanx.
hellocoldjesh chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
Okay this is great, I love it. You've done everything and freaking more! It definitely had humor and romance. The first chapter made me laugh - drunk Bella's funny! Also i had drama. Me being well, me 3 drama! D thanks for the entry!

~Berblack x
butterfly02 chapter 3 . 3/16/2010
such a good endingg :)
butterfly02 chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
yay :) soo good
heliumhelium chapter 2 . 3/12/2010
doews way soon mean ur posting it right now?
hellocoldjesh chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I love included all the words and made me laugh :]!

hope you continue in your story!
butterfly02 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Soo good :) i love it
WeirdAboutDreams chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Unusal, different, but looking forward to seeing where its going