|Reviews for Regret|
| Squarekiddo chapter 3 . 11/30
| Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 11/30
Ill be honest, it really does spoil my fun of reading the story, when you already spoiled the ending for me.
| C. Mechayoshi chapter 60 . 11/21
Read it all over a week or two. Awesome journey.
| Leftwich08 chapter 44 . 8/2
First why is he so crappy with a gun out of the blue second Xander went ahead to the roof and is suddenly kidnapped from somewhere behind him? Wth did I miss
| Leftwich08 chapter 23 . 7/31
Feet? Wings? Mouth? I understand adding a mouth lots of people are uncomfortable with the eating of electricity theory but that's too much with all that at once I can't even picture a Magnemite anymore all I get is a confusing mess... Would it not have been easier to just call it artificial and leave it at that... No additions like this seemed to be needed when ya mentioned Porygon...
| Leftwich08 chapter 5 . 7/30
Ah finally... I appreciate the type of story this is and how realistic you've been for a Pokemon story... but it seemed for a bit there you were going to foreshadow... If ya can call it that... Things going to hell at the end of every chapter and it was getting old quickly...
| Guest chapter 60 . 7/29
HAAHHHHHH!? WOW WHAT A RIDE!
| HelpfulNudge chapter 9 . 7/5
That idea could be fantastic or destructive. Getting changes in early.
| Some Guy In An Ambulance chapter 26 . 4/16
I don't blame him at all, but this guy screams ALOT!
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2016
And I thought it was going to be good, instead I got sappy crap
| Damn chapter 30 . 9/22/2016
"I glanced at the clock in the room and saw that it was only oh-ten hundred hours."
Oh ten hundred hours? Jesus
| Please Read This chapter 30 . 9/22/2016
The worst part about this story is your time telling skills, you want your main character to be militarized but the way he says the 24 hour time notation is retarded, halfway through chapter 30 you say,
"I glanced at the clock in the room and saw that it was only oh-ten hundred hours.".
No one says that, you sound mental. Why say "oh" there? And who in the military says "ten hundred hours"? Ten hundred is a thousand, of all my time in the service I've only ever heard overly eager recruits say that, literally everyone with sense says "10 o'clock" because ten hundred sounds dumb as hell, and you make these mistakes all the time and it makes me feel like this guy has a serve form of autism...
CPO Bert Williams
| infadinityfollower chapter 2 . 9/13/2016
| infadinityfollower chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
| Jolly Absol chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Just wanted to say that I consider this story as the single best pkmn fanfiction I've ever read. You combined incredibly flleshed out characters with a mindboggling plot and an incredible detail for details an emotion. Well done, truly well done.