|Reviews for cloud built|
| Fedski chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Loved this fic as well! KuroxFai are so cute! Again, love the way you write these characters! So very happy to have found you as an author! Congrats on another great work! Looking forward to more!
| walkthedead chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Ohohohoho! I liked it. especially this : Mokona lowers her voice dramatically, "Sakura did not knock on the door when we entered Syaoran's room. She saw Syaoran...", an glow of pink passes over her white furry appearance, "...without his clothes."
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! I LOLED AT THAT.
| Cizz chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I like it! :D
I think your characteri- (Oh, crap I forgot how to spell it. This is what happens when you insist on using a language you're still not fluent in...) eh, that thing, is very good, they were very IC. And Sakura and Syaoran made me smile, god, they're so freaking cute (And of course, the KuroFai. KuroFai is always cute...)
| Midnight x Poker chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
The Sakura and Syaoran part made me smile :D That blatantly happened somewhere along the line. And that exact reaction too xD
I love stuff with Kurogane seeing through Fai xD Always the best. And I agree, Fai wouldn't make a good Father, 'cause he's the Mommy!
Great job, especially on the characterisation :D
| mystearicas chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
(I'm probably getting way to into this, considering it's a oneshot, but oh well~)
I haven't been reading KuroFai at ALL because so many other things/pairings took over, but this morning I woke up and felt very deprived. But this made me smile, because it was short and sweet and a little angsty but mostly that's how KuroFai is and it made me laugh~. I also loved your SakuSyao, and Mokona ("Sakura-saw-Syaoran-WITHOUT-HIS-CLOTHES"~).
Also, I loved this sentence: "You are an idiot and you annoy me so much that I want to beat you. But if you start thinking you are worthless to everyone, you will never change for them." It was so KUROFAI, I loved it.
| Jeantron chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
| TrueDespair chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Oh wow. What a funny story. I really like it alot, more of the family moments or Kuro/fai (friendship) moments sometimes as well. It doesn't really matter if you write how they interact realistically as long as they are still (or mostly anyway) in character( which you did by the way.) _ I look forward to seeing future fics from you. _