Reviews for Behind Enemy Lines
kadronya chapter 17 . 17h
I love it
TwiTwiAgain chapter 15 . 3/18
Love this
TwiTwiAgain chapter 13 . 3/18
This was a hard chapter to read. Not looking forward to the next one either:-( Poor Edward
TwiTwiAgain chapter 11 . 3/18
This is why I can't stop reading this!
TwiTwiAgain chapter 10 . 3/18
Love a sleep-chatty Bella!

I love your Carlisle, BTW.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 3 . 3/17
Smoothing the dogs ears. Ugh, so sad.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 1 . 3/17
I love the way you gave us insight into the setting, then pow, they're attacked.
DreamInDecember chapter 17 . 12/25/2016
Is this the end?
jk chapter 10 . 11/11/2016
I wish he was just normal and NOT a whore. Its just tacky and makes him fucking gross. And why pair a WHORE with a virgin? its so fucking NOT BALANCED...ones pure and ones all used the fuck up...gross
jk chapter 9 . 11/11/2016
I swear you only ever read about people being this emotionally retarded. and its so out of place with Edward cause he told us a few times in earlier chapters that hes a straight forward type, no bullshit...except hes all full of bullshit
jk chapter 8 . 11/11/2016
I really don't care about for people that cant talk about their shit. Edwards a fucking pussy.
jk chapter 6 . 11/11/2016
I don't get it! Bella is in a WAR ZONE FREAKING OUT AND SAYING SHIT LIKE...PLEASE...PLEASE DONT MAKE ME USE A GUN!

?

if I'm in a war zone and I don't HAVE a gun I will fucking kill you and take yours!
jk chapter 4 . 11/11/2016
I really don't think I like this Edward very much. I don't understand why bella likes him, he sure hasn't given her any reason to. And really? What the fuck is wrong with your bella? Does she not have arches? Inner ear problem? Tumor? NO ONE FUCKING TRIPS THAT MUCH!
and supposedly shes in a life or death situation yet shes blushing every two fucking seconds? honestly? its just not believable cause you went to fucking far
jk chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
I found it a bit odd that EDWARD quoted pride and prejudice at the end of chapter one. This is supposed to be a MALE pov...just saying. It seemed REALLY out of place for a epov
vampdreams chapter 17 . 6/26/2016
Oh My God!
That was an abso-fuckin-lutely mind blowing story.
The way the characters evolved and the plot unraveled... loved it!
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