|Reviews for The Hetalian Monster|
| CheshireKitKat chapter 9 . 8/20/2014
Poor Canada! Chapter 9 ...
| Like An Indian Summer chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
I absolutely love this ffiction , as a Hetalian and a LM. I read these first few chapters and I'm going to continue the rest. I just wanted to say I few things about this fifth chapter :
First , thanks for not making Belarus a psychopatic Russia fangirl.
Second , the song you used , Dance in the Dark , is in my opinion inappropriate for this text. You're talking about feminine problems and these monthly meetings while the song is about a girl who can't have sex with the lights on. That's why " When he looks at her she falls apart " , she 'dances' in the Dark. ( Scheisse , for example , is a better choice. But from what I read until here , you're using Pre-Born This Way songs. )
But your ideas are lovely :D See you later , when I'll read the rest.
| perfectioninmypride chapter 29 . 12/21/2011
I love you. Just love you for writing this amazingly fantastic fic based on one of the most amazingly fantastic singers of all time. 3
| Lady Altrariel chapter 29 . 4/24/2011
I agree with you people are so shallow the attack mother monster with out understanding the true meaning of her lyrics.
| coporal cat chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
this story is soooo worth reading :)
| xshieldmaidenx chapter 6 . 2/4/2011
"But then he heard the victory music from "Final Fantasy VII." Text messages, too!"
I squeed. That's my text message tone. 3333 My roommates looked at me funny XD
| xshieldmaidenx chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
OMG. I almost cried. How not awesome. T_T
This is really sad... I have a tendency to get caught up in all the fun and games of Hetalia and forget about the tragedies the world has endured. :(
Beautifully written though. I'm totally your stalker for life now :)
| Say It Say My Name chapter 28 . 2/1/2011
As soon as I saw "Monster" in the title for my Prussia search, and saw that it had to do with Lady Gaga, I knew that this was something good. As I read, I realized it wasn't just something good. This is something funny, and, in the words of Prussia, awesome.
I read this whole thing - twenty-eight chapters - in about three hours. WORTH. EVERY. SECOND of rabid .
I got to the world cup chapter, and suddenly, SHAKIRA. What's better than awesome? I don't know. Beyond awesome.
BUT THEN! A Jon Stewart/Stephen Colbert Reference? Ma'am, I think I know love now, because this is so far beyond awesome that I can't NOT love it, and if that made any sense to you, please explain what I just said to me because I have just exploded my own brain.
This. This story has rewritten at least half of my headcanon, the wonderful in-character-ness and interactions and dialogues... and reminded me to find all those Lady Gaga songs. This has made my day. THIS. I gave it to all my hetalia-reading friends before I was even halfway through it. THIS has become my number one favorite Hetalia fic, and I am going to link it on my page. This, over the straight hours I read it, slowly caused me to squeal fangirl-ly ALOUD.
Especially I wish to mention "Speechless" as I did cry a bit at that. I don't know why, but I am a sucker for those sorts of make-you-cry stories. (It was cathartic or something.) Additionally, I am addicted to Prussia like Ke$ha is addicted to lo... sex. Yeah. So, that probably helped.
Now for my minor nitpicky mostly-personal-peeves criticism. I am probably the only weirdo who notices but you used the dialogue tag "shouted" a LOT. (I'm trying to remember other problems I had, but I can't really think of anything.) Uh. Your Italy scares me a bit. xD
Um, um, I thought of something else, but dammit, all I can think of is "please marry me in a totally platonic way". I GIVE UP. Time to go link ya on my profile then stalk your other stories.
I await February thirteenth with intensely bated breath.
| Celestrial chapter 28 . 2/1/2011
Ah, I heard from Facebook! XD So excited! Oh wow, the release of 'Born This Way' is on my birthday :O Such an awesome birthday present. Love your story BTW. Keep up the good work :)
(Joan of Arc needs more love in this fandom.)
| Sexykill69 chapter 28 . 1/29/2011
I can't wait for your rendition of, "Don't be a drag, be a Queen"
XD Good luck dear~!
| Pookey chapter 27 . 1/7/2011
You...are my hero. You have reached and went Beyond what the expectations of writing has made. You are, no doubt, one of the most creative and fearless writers I have ever had the honor to read and review for. You went above and beyond the call of writing and just made Mother Monster, I'm sure, so proud. I am in awe and also flailing like a fan girl who got to meet Prussia (cause who doesn't want to meet Prussia? lol)Thank you, thank you for shraing your ideas, Thank You for doing what few strive to do. Thank you
| The-Lime-Raven chapter 27 . 12/14/2010
You just blew my mind 27 times. Lady Gaga and Hetalia are two things on my 'List of Awesome', so when I found this fic I was blown away. I must say that the 'Bad Romance' chapters have to be my favourite. You described the dance so vividly it made me want to choreograph one with my friends! You are the most awesomest person in the world. *recomends story to friends*
| Celeste Waters chapter 27 . 11/11/2010
OMG! I absoulutely love this series of stories, I loved them all. 3
| backseat compromises chapter 27 . 11/5/2010
wow, these were awesome stuff! haha learnt a hell of a lot about history today lol. and i love that lady gaga quote too
| CashewLuu chapter 27 . 11/2/2010
I really love his fic! It's very interesting how you got these stoy ideas from songs that many people don't understand. However, I'm curious about one of GaGa's songs hat did not appear: Christmas Tree...