|Reviews for Pinky|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Please fix the pov. Make or in third person or in his pov. It is confusing. This is btw not a flame.
| Catmint chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
This is sweet and adorable, yet really emotional. I really like it.
However, you keep switching between first- and third-person narration and you should watch that - it's confusing and detracts attention from the story.
| Swingflip chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
that was great loved it
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 3/12/2010