|Reviews for stop breathing|
| little miss saigon chapter 4 . 7/15
it was a little hard to follow and understand because of the formatting BUT ITS BEAUTIFUL
THE VISUALS AND IMAGERY IS BEAUTIFUL HAHAHAHAHA /cackles
| little miss saigon chapter 3 . 7/15
this one is probs my fav chapter so far
because i mean
this scene is so believable and canon but hilariously never dID happens so this is like a dream come true
| little miss saigon chapter 1 . 7/15
So before this i read this life-wrecking fanfic that made me jusT QUIT LIFE AND FANFICS AND GO THROUGH A TEMPORARY SHOCK-INDUCED COMA but when i also found your fic on the general girl's favs list i was like YES and lunged for it because your fics are the remedies to angst and death and depression
So thank you for saving my soul
Btw im ur new stalker naow :] k thnxs
| x.-kTa-.x chapter 10 . 7/7
Was that Gray from Fairy Tail? Haahahahahahahah so awesome!
| B0R3DBL0GG3R chapter 14 . 6/12
I love Team 7 Shennanigens :)
| Salome Maranya chapter 3 . 5/1
Haha, no wonder Kakashi's a genius.
| Fuyumin chapter 14 . 3/15
Really now..:D omg i laughed so hard :D,it remind me of Gintama actually to tell you the truth :D and btw,i love manipulative Sakura 3
| cosmosalone200 chapter 7 . 12/20/2014
I LIKE manipulative Sakura
| cosmosalone200 chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
| Oonia chapter 9 . 10/29/2014
I just - just - YOU ARE BRILLIANT. Seriously, this chapter had me laughing out loud. It was an awesome plot twist! And I really like your writing, too. It's engaging and exciting to read. And oh, oh I LOVE what you've done with Sakura in this story, she's so manipulative! It's like, inner Sakura has finally come out to play!
Gosh, I'm horrible with reviews, but I just wanted to say that this story is awesome and that I'm gonna check out your other work as well :)
| MessedUpEl chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
At the beginning of this chapter I was like okay there's some odd fellow stripping in the middle of the road then the "GRAY!" part comes up and my jaw drops and I'm like this is a damn crossover. Lololol I love it
| The Official Girl Wonder chapter 14 . 8/5/2014
This is hilarious. ;)
| i see it chapter 10 . 7/23/2014
omfg lmao. I love gray-samaaaa so much I can't even. This would be so funny!
| ResidingDarkness chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
The heck? When did Gray and Lucy get to the Shinobi World?
| ResidingDarkness chapter 9 . 7/21/2014
I don't get it.