|Reviews for stop breathing|
| MessedUpEl chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
At the beginning of this chapter I was like okay there's some odd fellow stripping in the middle of the road then the "GRAY!" part comes up and my jaw drops and I'm like this is a damn crossover. Lololol I love it
| The Official Girl Wonder chapter 14 . 8/5/2014
This is hilarious. ;)
| i see it chapter 10 . 7/23/2014
omfg lmao. I love gray-samaaaa so much I can't even. This would be so funny!
| ResidingDarkness chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
The heck? When did Gray and Lucy get to the Shinobi World?
| ResidingDarkness chapter 9 . 7/21/2014
I don't get it.
| ResidingDarkness chapter 3 . 7/21/2014
The worst punishment of all.
| Wow chapter 9 . 7/5/2014
Oh my God. I should have expected the gay part but I didn't! The tables are turned...
| TheGrammarQueen chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
OH HELL YEAH I CALLED IT RIGHT FROM THE GUY STRIPPING
Crossovers! Yay! Smexy guys all around!
| mistyblue96 chapter 14 . 5/23/2014
When I first read that excerpt in the summary, I figured it was another gay sequence where Sasuke and Naruto accidentally kissed or whatever... but this was LOADS better than I imagined. xD
| mistyblue96 chapter 13 . 5/23/2014
"...I don't understand the question." Damn right. xD
| mistyblue96 chapter 9 . 5/23/2014
OMFG. This was GENIUS. xD
| Dbzgirl1011 chapter 8 . 4/18/2014
Why don't you just kill me?
| Dbzgirl1011 chapter 7 . 4/18/2014
| Dbzgirl1011 chapter 6 . 4/18/2014
Stop implying SasuSaku PLEASE ugh
| Dbzgirl1011 chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
Wow I love this xD