Reviews for stop breathing
TsubasaMei chapter 9 . 1/31/2014
AHAHAHA IM DYING OMG one of my favs 3
lucysaionji chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
oh my gosh.. its wonderful.. i love team seven and the way you represented them.. its awesome.. will you continue with this?:)
MCKC chapter 9 . 8/21/2013
OH MY GOD! HOW COULD YOU END IT THAT WAY?! WHERE THE HELL IS KAKASHI?! OH MY GOD! Oh please tell me they don't get butt humped, Sasuke and Naruto have been through enough already. And Sakura... She'd have to WATCH! She'd be mentally scarred for life. Oh dear
MCKC chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Lol! Don't apologize! I like your bashing and think you're spot on about it unfortunately anyways, can't wait to read more!
TerrifiedcheeseO chapter 10 . 8/15/2013
Omg fairy taaiiilll lol. I luv gray.
isolationism chapter 10 . 7/31/2013
I LOVE the FT reference. Lol
Guest chapter 14 . 3/28/2013
awwwww cliffy? pls continue
karenjuly16 chapter 14 . 3/26/2013
Dragon Ball Z anyone? love this one, wish it was longer though.
Petale-de-Rose chapter 13 . 3/4/2013
Aw poor Sakura :( I would actually love to read a story centered around this chapter and expanded. (HINTHINT!)
Petale-de-Rose chapter 9 . 3/4/2013
LMAO! I JUST ABOUT DIED LAUGHING! xD OH MY GOD How do you THINK of this stuff?! I don't believe I've ever read anything like this before in my entire life, you are too awesome, you are just- wait, there are more chapters lol can't talk! More reading!
Petale-de-Rose chapter 8 . 3/4/2013
Aw, that guy was so right! Sakura needs to be spoiled more by random ppl on the street because it's obviously not done enough in the manga :(
Petale-de-Rose chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
AWWWWWWW! I just can't get enough of this! ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
zandehr chapter 3 . 1/28/2013
the fact that they stole his book.. great. just great genin's they were.. what did kaka-sensei actually do to miss that moment of theft? -wide eyes- teaching them sex verbally? just verbally? bu- -gets smacked by sakura- oh..
zandehr chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
oww.. sasuke has motion sickness.. -snickers- sakura's been their medic ever since she's a kiddo. -smiles happily-
zandehr chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
-rolls arounf everywhere- that.. THAT was priceless. what id give to take a look at kaka-sensei's thoughts when Sasuke told him sakura was faking it. HAHAHA
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