Reviews for The Yellow Flash of Kiri
Luciendar chapter 17 . 1/26
The story is solid and the characters are great. I forced myself to finish what you'd written but won't be following. No offense to you, i just deeply hate the bad mom thing you're doing with Kushina. I was a single parent for seven and a half years. Kushina being that way has basically ruined the story for me. Best of luck on your story.
SinfulPride chapter 4 . 1/20
Why punch? He is holding two freaking swords? I mean, COME ON! Throwing a punch while holding a sword is ridiculously cumbersome. The swords also grant superior reach and keeps his UNARMED opponent at a range that prevents effective counter-attacks
NarutoUchiha2055 chapter 17 . 11/19/2017
please update the story. It's a amazing story and it's a shame you still haven't updated it. I know it's been 6 years and you still haven't updated it but I can still try to convince you.
RenegadeForLife chapter 17 . 10/10/2017
Shame this hasn't updated in 6 years. It's pretty great. Interesting that the author chose not to have Naruto inspire Gaara but I'm sure their were intended plot-lines that revolved around him. Even so it kind of feels like they built up too many antagonists.
ichigo chapter 17 . 9/20/2017
Where's the next part
Jeon Ar.c chapter 1 . 8/26/2017
My reaction to this chapter? I shouted Fuck 5 in the morning. I was really surprised that Kushina was alive, Like couldn't she take care of naruto before? and How the fuck is she alive
Lino Creeper chapter 17 . 7/11/2017
Well I say you should add fuu to the mini heram
my 2 guys chapter 17 . 4/19/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
the guardian of yu yevon chapter 17 . 4/10/2017
No offense to your writing this fanfiction sucks
singpu chapter 17 . 3/9/2017
Yo u dead
Guest chapter 2 . 2/25/2017
This is very interesting Its great and is there somebody who could draw naruto I see what he looks like I know you put it but I can't imagine him I've seen him too many times dressed in Orange
Shinra Ren chapter 17 . 2/11/2017
Dead Fic? Shame...
Shinra Ren chapter 8 . 2/11/2017
I wouldn't like it if kushina was forgiven. But still, I can live with it as long as she doesn't get any closer than friends to Naruto and Mei.
X chapter 17 . 2/1/2017
Not bad. You planning to update? It's been 5 years.
zakripng chapter 17 . 12/20/2016
Do you have any update incoming?
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