Reviews for The Yellow Flash of Kiri
Madara339 chapter 17 . 3/9
Yo u dead
Guest chapter 2 . 2/25
This is very interesting Its great and is there somebody who could draw naruto I see what he looks like I know you put it but I can't imagine him I've seen him too many times dressed in Orange
kiryuu9029 chapter 17 . 2/11
Dead Fic? Shame...
kiryuu9029 chapter 8 . 2/11
I wouldn't like it if kushina was forgiven. But still, I can live with it as long as she doesn't get any closer than friends to Naruto and Mei.
X chapter 17 . 2/1
Not bad. You planning to update? It's been 5 years.
zakripng chapter 17 . 12/20/2016
Do you have any update incoming?
johnrlozada chapter 8 . 12/18/2016
I loved the story until I read about Kushina being alive and abandoning Naruto. I was never a fan of stories about Naruto's parents being alive and abandoning him or choosing his siblings over him. Just why on earth would a parent leave their child? That's fucked up.
Haji the Monster chapter 17 . 10/16/2016
I find the kushina hate, unnecessary and electing danzo down right played out. I don't think I can't justify wasting anymore of my time with the story, now that you have failed so spectacularly at this last chapter.
DragonsWrath860 chapter 17 . 9/23/2016
Amazing story, one of the best I'v read
FanfictionAdmirer1 chapter 17 . 8/20/2016
I love this story it's one of the best I have read I can not wait for the next few chapters.
Son Zamasu chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
This is a good fic. I wish you could continue...
arinasution5 chapter 7 . 7/19/2016
F
epic.skillz chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
probably late but this is pretty awesome so far
Guest chapter 17 . 6/23/2016
Please make more chapters. It's very difficult to find a story this great on FF. The storyline is great and the grammar is amazing. It's such a shame to have a story this great go unfinished. - Grimm
Tarrasen.Sun chapter 17 . 6/17/2016
Please tell me this fic isnt abandoned?! :'(
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