Reviews for The Yellow Flash of Kiri
heavydestro chapter 7 . 2/24
sagoun chapter 17 . 2/17
When will come the next chapter of story? Is a very good and amazing story.
luketzoner chapter 17 . 1/31
nice, fic.
too bad youstoped updating it.
Residenthobo chapter 17 . 1/27
Personally, I really like fluff (since I don't have a life :c ) and I would love to see more! If you're okay with it, I mean.

I didn't see anything wrong with the fluff you have here if that makes you feel better?

About Fū/Fuu, I guess I'd like you to add her in? Because, well, I feel kind of bad for her... all the time... and it would break my heart not to see her here and I'd die, but that's okay, I mean, all that would happen is that my family would cry their eyes out and my friends would swear revenge and blame you for my death forever, but that doesn't really matter... xD Just had to, sorry, but I really would like to see Fū/Fuu added into the mix.
Ejammer chapter 17 . 1/6
agreed add fuu also get some family time with tenshi and naruto so much could be done with that
yoai's of Naruto chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
I stinking love this story!
mxdgray chapter 17 . 12/19/2013
Just kill the slutty whore Kushina.
mxdgray chapter 5 . 12/19/2013
Why namikaze clan? You clearly know that Minato was an orphan. Why not just use uzmaki clan?
Guest chapter 17 . 12/2/2013
It's amazing! Will you write more soon and update? Plz!
xSilentSakurax chapter 17 . 10/28/2013
Great story! I hope to read more in the future :)
antheunis011 chapter 8 . 8/26/2013
nice twist with the genin
Guest chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
Guest chapter 2 . 8/22/2013
good start
Amidamaru88 chapter 17 . 8/11/2013
why did you abandoned the story ?
kawii inc chapter 17 . 7/19/2013
good story hope you can get back to it soon. and yes fuu shoud be in the pairing
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