Reviews for Sins of Our Fathers
mangastar67 chapter 14 . 8/27/2014
Please oh PLEASE continue this! I really want to kno what happens! Im sure alot of us do.
Komiv chapter 14 . 8/10/2014
Great story! I like your portrayals of the characters-the AU/future setting works rather well, especially once the story gets going. The plot is definitely interesting, following Zuko's adventures, and I'd love to see this continue if only to see what havoc he and Toph get up to in the future.
Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 6 . 12/5/2012
You're kinda mangling the dialogue. The person doing the action should be the same person speaking in that paragraph. You're doing it the other way around OR giving them the entirely wrong lines. It is incredibly confusing to read.
Amber Annabeth Blue chapter 14 . 8/27/2012
update now!
haniichan chapter 3 . 3/2/2012
lol i like this story but this chapter just screamed disney's Pocahontas to me, i was actually waiting for them to burst out into song all like "savages, savages barely even human!~" lmao
krycelli chapter 14 . 1/29/2012
Just caught up with the current chapter, and I love where this story is headed! I'm glad Toph finally showed up (and just when the Avatar was looking for an earthbending teacher too!), and I'm waiting for Zuko's group and Katara's group to meet up somehow. I just really want them to interract again, but I can't figure out how/why they would need to get together. Maybe if the Avatar moves on to waterbending? Anyways, I like your story, and I really hope you write more soon. I don't normally read ongoing stories, but the summary for this one really intrigued me, and I'm really glad I gave it a try. Can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/10/2012
I am currently at chapter 9 of this story and am loving it very much so far. The AUness in your story is really original along with many of tour other ideas. I have read your other story as well, and loved it! In Sins of our father, everytime I think about Jinju and Katara together I fell like dying, I really don't know why but I feel like I hate Jinju almost as much as Zuko does, there's just something about him...ugh!

Well that's what makes your story soo good, you can really make your readers fell the story (it may not make sense but I hope you know what I'm talking about.)

I hope that Zuko doesn't fl in love with some other girl, I woluldnprobably hate her more than I hate Jinju, I'm sure that some random girl doesn't deserve my over exaggerative hate...

Well this story is really good and I hope to read more from it.

Now I'm off to continue reading and Thank you for sharing your writting talents! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
This is really good I hope you update soon!
charlaine2124 chapter 14 . 1/8/2012
Shiiiiiinyyyyyyyy :-D:-D

I LOVE it, all of it. Especially Aang. He's much cooler when he doesn't have a crush on Katara and Avatar complex... (well, I'm seeing a bit of a crush, but it's cute rather than competitive.)

And YAY FOR TOPH! I always look forward to seeing her in any fanfiction...

Excellent work and keep writing :-D

Char xxx
Isabella chapter 14 . 1/7/2012
THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY! I absolutely looove it! Especially the zutara scenes and the part with toph! Shes amazing! Hehe i feel rlly bad for zuko and katara, hopefully they can be together again! And i wa rlly surprised tht aang is not the avatar, i seriously thought he was the one, but i like tht someone esle was the avatar, the change is good! Cant wait to read more, plz update soon!
Lila Priceless chapter 14 . 1/6/2012
This is very interesting and unique. I look forward to seeing where you take it.
trumpetgurl92 chapter 14 . 1/6/2012
More please.
Kiren chapter 13 . 1/2/2012
I must say, I was surprised when Avatar wasn't Aang. ;) But well, Ruon's feels somehow like Aang... only older. :D

Also, happy to see Toph. She's awesome and I like her working with Zuko. Those two together can kick lots of arses. (I don't mean them together like "together", but as friends.) ;)
Kiren chapter 14 . 1/2/2012
Interesting story. I love how you made Zuko grow up in Water Tribe. ;)

Also, I'm currious how it work out with Zuko and Katara, her being bethroted and all.
bloodedstrawberry chapter 14 . 12/31/2011
your story is abit confusing at times but it's good. keep up the good writing. i thought it was slow at first but now it's so much more is going on i want to go back to the beginging i'm dreading katara ending up with her fiance i really hope she gets back with zuko soon.
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