Reviews for Terribly Mistaken chapter 8 . 1/16/2014
hmm... I am curious how it goes from here... I mean what with the fidelius?... I can see the scene in my mind...
J: Remmy I want you to be my secret keeper
There was a long silence, before Remus looked James square in the eye
R: No, you are only asking because you still feel guilty... ask Sirius like you would have
James began to feel mad, his temper rising
J: NO I am Not. I can't ask Sirius, everybody expects me to ask Sirius! I won't endanger either of you that way!" His voice became softer "please, moony, at least think about it, Sirius is my brother, but I trust you with my life, more important with Harry's life, would you please protect my fawn?
SoundWriter chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
I liked the part of the story that involved their friendship being tested and Sirius defending Remus. What I didn't like as much were all the sex scenes (too many) and the fact that they didn't even think of questioning Peter. James himself said that it had to be one of the Marauders, and once he'd ruled out Sirius and Remus, why didn't he consider Peter? But I really liked the characterization of the Marauders, especially Remus and Sirius, and the punches James got. Nice job, but please, avoid too many sex scenes.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
You know your comments at the end of the chapter make me want to stop reading! Reviews are given as they are deserved based on the writing and not something you are entitled too as you seem to think! I can tell your still in high school by your writting but still ...
Madame Masquerade 64 chapter 8 . 5/30/2012
I enjoyed this story so much. It was so interesting to see this side of the harry potter plot, which is something that was never really explored. Well done
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 8 . 6/7/2011
Awww,haha! Everything worked out!Loved it!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 7 . 6/7/2011
XD!Go go shower!loool!Awesome,i love how you well you wrote down their emotions and the way they know each others' feelings almost!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 6 . 6/7/2011
Awww,i loved that!The LilyJames moments with bits of Harry, just sweeeet!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 5 . 6/7/2011
Oh my...tense moments are tense alright!But i think you did it wonderfully!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 4 . 6/7/2011
Oh goooood,i feel somewhat bad for James too,honestly!All of their friendship is being tested at this point!Good job with this chpater!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
WOOOW!I love how they are here!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
WOW! Lily is really scary when angered!Good job with the character!
tia22 chapter 8 . 3/5/2011
i really enjoyed this.
imSiriuslyLupin4you chapter 8 . 2/27/2011
You know, I think that I may have read this fic at least six times and I have never realized that there was more than one chapter... I can be so stupid sometimes...

Anyway, love this! Off to favorite it now.
Purishirakun chapter 8 . 2/14/2011
LOL ah poor James XD i love the sex scenes!
looneylunalovesyou chapter 8 . 2/12/2011
Sorry it took me so long to read this. My computer broke (*cries*) and I'm on my Mom and Dad's. But what makes this worse, is I'm not supposed to read fanfiction on their computer. :/ But even WORSE this computer has no SPELL CHECK! DD: So yeah. Anyway, this chapter was wonderful. I love your writing so, so much. (: It wasn't too rushed at all.


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