Reviews for Never Quite Enough
Mumofpicklegirls chapter 1 . 5/3
Omg! How clever!
Sniff, sniff
meelee72 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
U sneaky little devil. :)
That was heart breaking, but u definately had me thinking Edward was the one who passed, so great job w/ that.
- It was really sad, tho. :(
& the ending, when the others who passed joined her. - very cool.

- I have just discovered ur stories, so u'll probably be hearing alot from me.- hope I don't bug ya.

.. Loved this piece.
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
ooh so sad. xx
pauleen chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Beautiful and so sad.
paragod chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
OMG, so poignant I couldn't stop crying. Your an amazing writer I love your work.
cool twist :) super sad though :'(
Debbie in S. Florida chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Oh, this was heartbreakingly good! I'm sitting here with tears running down my face. I'll admit, I didn't catch on at first, but I did have a little inkling partway through that all was not as it seemed. You managed to illustrate their love so beautifully, though, in such a short time. It was beautiful, but so sad. I think the saddest part is that it happens so often in real life, so as sad it is to read, it's even worse to realize people face this every day, though, of course, it's those left behind who suffer most. I rarely read one-shots, because I always want MORE, but I'm glad I read this. Definitely mades me think, and makes me want to read more of your writing.

Justine Lark chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Very well done. It's emotional and the pacing is just right to lead up to the final twist as to what exactly has happened.
mrglinsey chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
WOW! Very powerful ending.
The Future Mrs Pattinson chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Great story! I am writing this wile crying like a baby. the whole thing was just so sad...

Loved the ending by the way, it was really surprising and made the story that much better.

Great job)
twilightobsessed40873a chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
WOW! Just WOW!
JonAndCompanyOffToFightTheDead chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
A great story. Very well written.
Anisah Pinky chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
wow what a twist!
Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Completely did not see that ending coming! You did a great job of weaving the intrigue with surprise and sadness. Well done on an amazing oneshot! Tragic x Loved it. Beautifully done x
VampiresHaveLaws chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
This was beautiful, and heartbreaking, and made me cry. So very good. :)
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