Reviews for Harem's Betrayal, Naruto's Hate
ztron24 chapter 3 . 9/29/2015
Great story will they reconcile
StoryReigns96 chapter 2 . 9/28/2015
Hinata had a right to be pissed, I would be too if that happened to me.
She did not have the right to become a vicious bitch and cuckold Naruto because she was insecure, if you feel like a rebound you either break-up or talk about it. You don't cheat for some bullshit revenge.
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 5 . 9/27/2014
nice
You suck chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
Your grammar sucks
Guest chapter 5 . 9/6/2014
You ruined Hinata and Kurenai for me... Every time i think of them now i think of betrayal and slut...it pisses me the FUCK OFF!
whispers in the dark8516 chapter 5 . 7/10/2014
So far i give the story 3 1/4 out of 5, mostly because of the fact that you put a slight hope for naruto to come out happy. Heck if it weren't for that slight hope i would say to much hurt thats it secs to be little more than you making naruto misirable, however i do real
ise that you are only on chapter 5 so i will
hold any flames or similar comments of that type until this story is complete or you fuck up bigtime whichever event occurs
omnimon12 chapter 5 . 1/29/2014
This fic isn't dead, is it?
Falcon800 chapter 5 . 11/14/2013
It may not be her problem but it is happening in her village and she is the Hokage and I thought she liked Naruto but not doing anything after the betrayals shows different
LolaTheSa chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
Hinata is like minato, naruto is like kushina... go figure
LolaTheSa chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
so you would do this if a guy you loved came to you after he was completely betrayed by the one he thought was his 'one. I am sorry but that is utterly RETARDED!
Darth Khan N7 chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
For the love of...anything that's worth love don't ruin this story by overrunning it with
OC's
Killzone180 chapter 5 . 8/2/2013
This is an awesome story, very original and very creative. I hope you come back to this fic!
Veldrisk chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
Good story so far. I would like to see this continued and see what Anko and Ino do to help heal Naruto's heart.
Iryerris chapter 4 . 6/25/2013
Judgement of the Sword, huh?

Interesting technique name.
strijer987 chapter 5 . 6/20/2013
awesome
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