Reviews for The Wrong Cullen
Psychoholic2182 chapter 4 . 8/16/2010
So far so good, I'm digging the story and hope you get around to updating it soon. The only problem I have with it is that it seems to be missing words in some of the sentences, I don't know if it's happening when the chapter gets posted or if you're just forgetting them when you're writing cause I've done that myself if I write to fast but it's not super bad and I still understand what's being said, but other than that great story so far
MeganCSmith chapter 4 . 6/12/2010
this is very good well done. update soon please! xx
Xemnas Swan chapter 4 . 3/21/2010
Keep going and do what u think is best, it's your story! XD
The Accident Experiment chapter 4 . 3/19/2010
Good story so far, I can't imagine why baically nobody has reviewed. You should keep up the story though regardless, it's good. As for your questions I wouldn't mind either way if you choose to stay on Alice POV or decide to change to Bellas' i think it would be good either way.

Just one thing, you might want to think about moving the text to the left instead of keeping it in the middle. It makes it eaiser to read that way.
X-LonelyGirl-X chapter 4 . 3/19/2010
Brilliant :) I don't know why no one else seems to be reviewing - I love this :) I think the idea to keep the POV as Alice is good, so we dont find out how Bella feels until Alice does - gives it more 'aw' factor :P x
X-LonelyGirl-X chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
Woo I'm the first review it seems :) Very good story so far, keep it up :D I look forward to reading more, update soon x