|Reviews for One Kiss|
| Magic Kirby chapter 10 . 4/21/2013
I really like this story, hope you keep it up!
| LordTarr chapter 10 . 12/12/2012
This is the first Transformers fic I've read. And it's a damn good fic too. Please say you have more chapters? I enjoy reading and following Zoe on here adventure to become independent. And, dare I say it, human?
| Falling Right Side-Up chapter 10 . 11/5/2012
I really like this. An OC yet not. LOL. And it's not all about Sam for once. I also like the moral questions this dilemma raises. Hope to see an update soon!
| screwlove.screwlife chapter 10 . 11/1/2012
This is amazing. I just mean, the flow of the story, the characterization, everything is just so amazing! You've done an awesome job!
| sweettea1 chapter 10 . 11/1/2012
I just found this story and I LOVE it! It's so well written and now I have a new-found love for Zoe. The way you portray her in this story is amazing. Please continue and update soon. ;)
| Lovely Rain Dancer chapter 10 . 10/31/2012
Zoe is awesome. I really really love her. And I'm sorta scared of when they'll realize that she used to be Alice.
| Lovely Rain Dancer chapter 9 . 8/24/2012
This story is great! Really original. I love the idea of Alice gaining free will and surviving, specially since we didn't get enough of her in the movie.
Continue with this story, please! I'd love to read more.
| DG a.k.a Demon Gurl chapter 9 . 5/28/2012
Ok I have read the first few (8) chapters about a hundred times. I love the characters voice and how you input her turmoil. I know it's been two years but please update! I would love to know what happens next and how it turns out for her!
| Mr. Runner chapter 9 . 5/1/2012
Wow, this is actually possible _ I feel so distraught for Zoe having to hide the truth about her past :'( Maybe if and when*wink* she does reveal the truth, the Autobots won't go all "Give Me Your Face" to her.
Great story so far... PLEASE CONTINUE!
| DragonofGreed chapter 8 . 1/31/2012
I absolutely love what you've done so far. Please update soon. I like the idea of this character with human and bot qualitys trying to explore the idea of dating and flirting. I think you will do an amazing job with it however it goes.
| Tootsie4ever chapter 8 . 4/18/2011
I Love It! PLEASE update soon!
| chaitea16 chapter 8 . 4/5/2011
I adore the way Zoe and Charlotte interact. The supportive friendship feels authentic perceived through Zoe's analytical optics. The emotion each action and sentiment serves as another reminder to just how new this whole sentience thing must be for her. I especially enjoyed how you actually made the shopping trip interesting. It would have to be the best clothing-related inner turmoil I've ever read.
| Lunar Mist chapter 8 . 4/3/2011
Aw! Zoo's crushing on a human AND a mech. I have a feeling Hound would love her more for herself and Leo would like her for her body.
| chaitea16 chapter 7 . 4/2/2011
I want to give Zoe so many hugs. Not nearly as many as Phoenix, but still. Shes sympathetic without being pathetic. The back story you keep crafting for her gets all the more interesting and has me anticipating a potential Thundercracker appearance with bated breath. I especially love how you didn't make him some abusive owner in the past. Takes away the potential 'forced' feeling that back story usually has and makes for a in this case made for quiet an interesting character evaluation. The focus is more on her state of being and new found development opposed to recovering from how hurt the badly mech/man hurt her in the past. Though come to think of it, if you did write one of those you'd manage to find a way to make it epically awesome.
| mooncrossed chapter 8 . 4/2/2011
So she's got a little breathing room after that last scare? I'm glad. She could use a break (of the non-painful variety) before meeting the Autobot head honcho. Looking forward to the next chapter!