Reviews for The Best Laid Plans
Meyli Vaisyl chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
I can't believe they lost their baby! But I still love this story and Neal and Peer are so funny!
Happy New Year!
Me├┐li.
georgiamomma123 chapter 2 . 10/31/2010
Very well written story, not very wordy, but said enough to effectively get the feelings and emotions across. Awesome. Rather explains why they have not had kids yet in the show. She would have been far enough along to have asked what the sex of the child was, but telling on the emotions as you were, it wouldn't have fit in. Great, story. Hope we hear more from you.
Stroma chapter 2 . 8/7/2010
Very good.
Amberlyn Lonesomhel chapter 2 . 3/23/2010
I must commend you. You did a fantastic job at capturing the characters; true essences and they really pop in your writing.
JeanneZ84 chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
This was such a sad story.

Well,the Burke's will get through this all with the support of one Particular friend and family member Neal Caffrey.

JeanneZ84
JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Oh! This is the most aweful thing to happen.

E and Peter wanted this baby very much and Neal was ready to be Uncle Neal.

Well,its a good thing Peter got a hold of needs him right and him both will.

JEanneZ84
FlapperFinzNoNames10201303 chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
AW. They lost the baby [ They lost the baby! x[ AW! *Sniffle* That was a really good story, I really liked it. But its so sad, but I love it. xD Great writing, Nayah
FlapperFinzNoNames10201303 chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
"The best-laid plans of mice and men go oft awry" I love the poem, and I love the story Of Mice and Men. And I love the cleverness behind the title. This is SOO SAD! Poor Elizabeth, even more poor Peter. [ Sad, but very well written and I'm enjoying it so far _. Off to chapter 2! Nayah
Dickensian812 chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
Aw, that was so sad. But sweet! But so sad!
tigerlily0 chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
Good story. I feel badly for Peter and El, but I love how Neal was there for them, even handling the blood.