|Reviews for An Unfortunate Twist of Fate|
| DarkTwilight129 chapter 10 . 12/20/2012
Im Kind of Disappointed.
i just didn't like they're reunion. I think that Edward and Elizabeth's reunion would have been more dramatic and emotional.
| lauren chapter 10 . 3/17/2012
The reunion of Ed and Elizabeth should have been MUCH better. Remember she's his MOTHER, whom he's thought dead for years. Also, a Elizabeth point of view would have been excellent when they found out Edward was gonna kill himself.
| Misstyfoot chapter 10 . 9/21/2011
Good story, but I don't really like the ending. It's not like i'd expect how mother and son would reunite.
| Alia chapter 10 . 2/6/2011
1. I love this Story! , and of-course you should'nt end it .
2. It was a little bad way to end the story , but i still liked the chapter.
3. PLEASE DO A SEQUEL!... Thx ,
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
| I.wanna.be.like.Rosalie1264 chapter 10 . 7/19/2010
awwww, thats a really nice story, i love it! I think bellas reaction to elizebeth turning up was really good x
| Bellaangel383 chapter 2 . 6/2/2010
i love it!
i can't wait to see what happens next!
| Bellaangel383 chapter 10 . 5/31/2010
| shobsnet02 chapter 10 . 4/30/2010
Can you please add Elizabeth's POV? Oh, and please, please update really soon. I really love your story and you are a great author. Thanks. :D
| PaintedTeacherLady chapter 10 . 4/2/2010
From this point on, I feel that this story should be primarily seen from Edward's POV, at least for the time being. Of course, a refreshing POV of different scenes is also nice, but because the story so far is focusing on Elizabeth's return and Edward's surprise to find his mother a vampire, it only makes sense that the POVs are from Elizabeth and Edward.
I'm interested to see Elizabeth's inward monologue to herself in response to seeing Edward - and Edward's reaction to this.
Honestly, maybe a Bella POV may be needed as a break between - and even a Jasper POV from the emotional standpoint.
| ILoveEdwardCullen1997 chapter 10 . 3/31/2010
| Miude chapter 10 . 3/31/2010
Finally Liz Ed reunion! I loved it!
| Miude chapter 9 . 3/31/2010
Aww.. So sweet! Loved it!
But I want to read Elizabeth and Edward's reunion!
| caww chapter 10 . 3/30/2010
Wow! giggle gee, that secret was kept well from Edward!
Nice how Edward felt about the word 'home' when Bella used it.
I so want to know what Edward picked up from your sentence..'And then his head whipped up and I could see the look of shock on his face. It mingled with confusion.'
I would think,it's kind of a mixed bag of emotions for Bella. Thank goodness, that she is more understanding, sharing, giving,and all.
But that she just got Edward back! Won't he now want to have many moments of alone time with his lost Mother too? He does deserve those moments...but with that off my chest...I can't wait to read what's on your mind on how they balance out their relationships. I'm sure they will get along much better because they all have more class then my insecurites.
| Rose N Valerie chapter 10 . 3/30/2010
Totally an aww chapter. I think you should also do an Edward pov from him being sepparated from bella. Also I think you should keep going the story is just getting exciting and original.