|Reviews for Built on a Lie|
| Ambroisie-Seduisante chapter 29 . 4/25
really hoping you'll update one day... this has always been one of my favorite stories here on FF, it's a shame that you put so much effort in and haven't finished it! Your readers love you :) !
| Tibricel Tibby chapter 29 . 10/10/2014
This was a really great story I wish that it might one day have the con conclusion it deserves.
| Guest chapter 29 . 12/1/2013
Why is chapter 29 the last one? I . . The way you describe the characters they really fit into what was in my mind while reading twilight. I love how Angela isn't all about Jaspers looks but knows when it's her time to speak up. And the way you portreted Maria, I feel like that is just the way someone would be- you did a terrific job with this story line and please please please tell me you'll update?!
| Sketching Girl chapter 8 . 10/25/2013
I've just read Chapters 1 - 7, and I cried. I love this! Thank you for moving me emotionally and making such a beautiful story! I can't wait to read the rest! I loved the line "Look back, ...Look back at me." That is so beautiful, and of course we know he could have heard her. It was such a romantic line in the adaptation of North and South, but I didn't remember where the line was from until you mention it at the end, it fits so perfectly in here. I am so willing them to get together! I LOVE IT! Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it on here! You've made me very happy!
| kantorkan chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
Not sure yet need to read a few more chapters,so let us get started shall we?
| kantorkan chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
I love me some Angela and jasper loven',let the fun began folks.
| jace4ever chapter 29 . 8/16/2013
I never knew that this was a pairing and I have to say I love it. I don't really like the Bella Jasper pairing at all. I do love to read about Jasper. He is my favorite character of the whole Twilight series. Besides Paul. But you did an awesome story here. Thanks.
| Aista chapter 29 . 5/26/2013
Oh you write this pairing magnificently! Frankly, you nailed Angela for me. She's so measured and mature in nearly everything that she does/says (exactly how I imagined her). I also like how you've actually developed a relationship between them. Most fics seem to base all the attraction in the physical but you can tell that Jasper really needs her for herself; she's his clarity. I really really enjoyed reading this, thank you for writing it.
| Mr. Shy Rockstar chapter 5 . 3/9/2013
The beginning of this chapter had my heart racing!
| DavidKing chapter 29 . 1/21/2013
Glad he found out his creator is still alive, but unfortunate that they marked her to leave him a message. Finally meeting back with his family, I expected there to be some remants of his past love. It must be difficult for him to be so conflicted. Enjoyed the read very much (as usual).
After all that reading, it has finally come to a stand still. I am both upset and satisfied. Happy to have finally got through it all, but not as happy that I have no choice but to stop here. What a thrill. I picked up on so many emotions and immersed myself almost completely into every chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and I cannot wait to read more.
| kirifox chapter 29 . 1/21/2013
Really excellent story. I can feel Jasper's anguish at having to train everyone to fight, knowing that fights always leave someone dead. I hope that, somehow, Maria, Peter and Char, the wolves, everyone comes together to annihilate the Volturi once and for all. You are the author...please make it so!
| DavidKing chapter 28 . 1/21/2013
No complaints. I can't compliment reading this story enough. I specifically enjoyed how he had to be there for her every step of the way, despite also having to maintain his control as well. Maybe it wasn't so bad because he knew she depended on him to remain calm and that was a motivating factor.
| DavidKing chapter 27 . 1/21/2013
Good that they finally got time to themselves after training for quite a while. In my opinion, them "making it official" did not have too much detail or too little detail. It seemed perfectly balanced.
| DavidKing chapter 26 . 1/20/2013
Rosalie is very wise. I hadn't anticipated that. They seem to be doing well in developing her to their lifestyle. I'm having a lot of fun reading this.
| DavidKing chapter 25 . 1/19/2013
Wow, so she died after being confirmed alive in previous chapters? I find that both amusing and a little wrong based on your reasons for doing so. Glad he finally connected with his old family again and is getting more help. It makes the odds seem so much easier considering they are still in Italy and near the Volturi. Enjoyed reading as usual.