Reviews for Ethereal Blackness
Atrum Ferox chapter 4 . 3/21/2010
good stuff between saturn and goten. can't wait for more.
ZHERO chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Odd I was expecting Rini to act like Panini from Chowder around

Trunks and Goten
drake202 chapter 4 . 3/20/2010
so goten lost dang it oh well he was holding back since he didnt go super saiyan though i dont think trunks is going to hold back at all still i cant wait for the next chapter
drake202 chapter 3 . 3/19/2010
oh man that was funny i can just picture the scouts expressions when vegeta punched that machine next part i cant wait to read is when the scouts sees goten and trunk's fight
Atrum Ferox chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
good shame if u're leeching off dbz. enjoying moments where characters from other animes react to events in the dbz anime such as this is amusing and creative with amy using that computer and all. keep it up!
ZHERO chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
I wonder how that pretty boy wet nosed fake ass casanova wannabe

prick Tuxedo Mask reacts when the REAL heroes show up.
drake202 chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
hm very interesting just two questions are there going to be any pairings in this story and i wonder how the scouts are going to react to the z fighters punching bag score
zhero chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Look you gotta try to capture the characters of the dbz team.

While I can see Sailor moon bonding with Goku and Gohan, and

Mars bonding with Vegeta and Trunks, I can't see Tu
Jay FicLover chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Ouch, some serious beating just there. That's why I favor the Sailor Moon manga over the anime; stronger power levels for all the scouts in general.

So, do these baddies work for Dabura and Babidi? Are they actually gathering energy for Buu's awakening? And the scouts saw the Cell games on TV. Please don't tell me they believe that crap about Videl's father being the one who beat Cell, even anime-version Chibi Moon might be braver and stronger than him.

Do they all live in Satan city here or do they still live in Tokyo? I'd recommend making Satan city another city near Tokyo, or something, instead. Because saying that Rini came from the future of "Crystal Satan" would sound way strange. XD

Hope the DBZ gang show up soon!
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