|Reviews for When Doom met Death|
| iheartpickles chapter 18 . 1/3
YAAAAAAAAA Nathan Fillion! Castle is awesome
| DragonCrusader chapter 17 . 10/7/2014
Can you please explain the end?
| saudade do coracao chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
So hey, I left the review under this, but was too lazy to sign in, but then I had to sign in after that because I want to follow this story. ;) This is fun. I like how Rachel keeps reading romance novels about Italian men (and Italian men only) - how long is it gonna take for Nico to clue in? It *is* kind of difficult to follow with the chronology being all over the place, but when I am able to place events in order in my mind, I kind of like it. I think it would help if it were clearer in each segment whether they were together at that point or not. It would take less guesswork out of reading and allow me to concentrate on what's actually happening in the scene.
I feel like we've seen a lot about how Nico felt about Rachel when he was younger, but not much of how Rachel felt about him. Did she know he had a crush on her? Was she blissfully unaware and just thinking of him as a kid brother or something? Did she think of him at all?
Of course I am just dying to get to the parts when we find out how they actually got together - how they went from being roommates to lovers. Like, I really want to read that. In the meantime, I loved the scene where Nico is kind of an emo 20-year-old advising Dylan to get out now because it's "hell" to date Rachel. That's quite a statement when you consider who's saying it!
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/14/2014
I really liked this one. It was amazing and felt more realistic than the others (but the others are fun, too).
| guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
I absolutely love these. I think you capture Rachel and Nicos personalities perfectly. I am completely addicted. I was wondering if you take suggestions? Because if you do I was thinking Rachel catching Nico smoking then lecturing him would be funny.
| Our Mismatched Socks chapter 18 . 5/17/2014
This. Is. Hilarious!
| sabrina-luna-potter chapter 18 . 1/13/2014
Awesome! You haven't updated for a while, but please continue!
| Cookies chapter 18 . 1/5/2014
| blank canvas of me chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
"Percy, your girlfriend's sexually harassing me!"
Oh my gods.
This is awesome!
| Cookies chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
If you listen to Rachel, I'll give you a free cookie! (::)
| bleachers chapter 18 . 10/4/2013
Still can't deal with the cute.
| Dumbles chapter 16 . 9/22/2013
Wow! I've been reading through this fic but I really felt I had to review this chapter , because it stands out. Something like this could be a really interesting multi chaptered story! Though that might just be because I adore Nico Rachel living together stories. Anyway, great chapter!
I hope to see more like this.
| ayahsad167 chapter 18 . 9/4/2013
You are...a brilliant goddamn writer. Seriously. And not just for this, but for all of your stories. I have to say, I'm kinda jealous ;).
| Temptation Through Perception chapter 18 . 8/26/2013
Amazing story! I love them all. Just an idea, but maybe you could try writing more of the Warren Dare/Rachel interactions. And Dylan vs. Nico. That'd be funny, I think
| Stina Whatever chapter 18 . 8/24/2013
I really like the line about CHS cheerfully denying the existence of paperwork.