Reviews for Partners
SylverSpyder chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
Good job. :)
BlueDiamondStar chapter 7 . 2/19/2013
Continuing reading every one of your stories (or at least most of them).
This one's really awesome. I just loved it all the way.
The end of last chapter was especially hilarious. I laughed and melted of blushing Neal image.
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 9/20/2012
great story! too bad they didn't get fowler though...
wotumba1 chapter 5 . 9/19/2012
good to have june around...
the plan sounds dangerous enough though!
wotumba1 chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
so it was really peter sending the texts via mozzie... so at least it got that part half-right ;-)

what's peter planning to do?
wotumba1 chapter 2 . 9/19/2012
seems like el is finding out what mozzie's trying to tell her
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
at least el and jones don't seem to believe the version fowler's telling...
JosieStyle chapter 7 . 2/26/2012
What a nice one! I read it 2 times and still feel like wanna do that again!


Stroma chapter 7 . 8/7/2010
Very good story
pandalaughing chapter 7 . 8/2/2010
Good story, but you might think about getting a beta. Some of your characters acted in frankly unbelieveable ways (such as El and Jones being too stupid to get the Fowl remark, Elizabeth is not stupid!), and your use of italics was rather random. And the constant Mozzie nose twitching was annoying, especially since I've never seen him do anything like that. Other than that your writing was strong and kept me interested all through the story, which is saying something since a lot of writers lose me half way through. If you can't tell, I'm a little picky. ;)
Sparky Dorian chapter 7 . 5/14/2010
Oh! That was so cute! :) I loved it! I was really on edge in the middle... Like a lot. All the friendship was cool, and I liked the part about how Neal will get something done if it needs to be (like with him carrying Peter).
EnsignRo chapter 7 . 3/27/2010
Hi, really enjoyed reading this. Love the relationship they both have and you portrayed it so well.
alvahana chapter 7 . 3/16/2010
great story! love the interaction between Neal and Peter, love the ending! looking forward to your new stories~
j3nnee chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Thanks for all the nice reviews.

I had this as a whole story on my google docs so I just cut it up so it could be read in pieces. Figured it was best to post it all at once since it was already finished. I'm impatient. ;)

I do have a couple more I will be posting soon.

anitrasdance chapter 7 . 3/14/2010
Great story. Thanks for posting it.
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