Reviews for A Different Universe
Guest chapter 14 . 2/15
Men do not keep growing until their mid 20's. You stop when puberty ends which is no later than 18.
ProditorMagnus chapter 9 . 1/25
Pity that 600097930 can no longer be found.
mattcun chapter 23 . 1/13
i cant wait to see the next chapter
Araytigre chapter 23 . 12/10/2016
At this point, there should be only 2 Horcrux's left (assuming that the Locket has been taken care of by now), that being the Diadem and Nagini. I'm glad that Ginny is finally giving up on her quest for Harry, realising the futility of Him per say. Now she can actively pursue some other Rich Bloke that she can dominate, while spying for Harry and Hermione. Dumbles will get "His" sooner or later, meanwhile Severus, Draco, and Narcissa will help will the downfall of not only Tom, but Albus too. Hmm... I recall that Dumbles is no longer the Chief Wizard of the Wizengamot, but is he still the Mugwump of the ICW? Hopefully, Amelia will take up the Goblins offer to take care of the Dementors, and if she plays her cards right, she might be able to hire some of the Goblin Warriors as Guards for Azkaban too. Little does Tom know, but his days are numbered, and Garrick is heeding Harry's warning. I do hope that your Muse will let you continue this wonderful story. Thank You. TTFN
EmmSea chapter 23 . 12/9/2016
Why won't this review screen display a slash?
EmmSea chapter 23 . 12/9/2016
A not too bad story. IMO worth the time to read. ... Dunuelos, the spellinggrammar in this story is nowhere near the standard of your other stories. This made it harder to readless satisfying. Either or, thanks for your efforts. Cheers, MC.
scubatrex chapter 23 . 11/16/2016
I have been reading all of your stories and was wondering if you plan to complete this one. The Traveler stories are addictive.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/18/2016
Muggle-Worthy Excuse Committee - I like the idea, but they need to hire some smarter people!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/18/2016
Personally, I enjoy sakurademonalchemist's use of the word "Wiggle" for wizards/witches. After all, they call *us* Muggles...
Guest chapter 9 . 10/18/2016
FTR, the lemon is gone - do you mind removing the reference from the fic?

Over 15 minutes of my life I can't get back!
Guest chapter 8 . 10/18/2016
BAD MUSE! BAD! GET BACK IN DUNUELOS' HEAD!"
Bjalf chapter 22 . 10/8/2016
Lemons read like a bad porn movie. What's with the obsession with swallowing, and the importance of showing that it's done?
Bjalf chapter 4 . 10/8/2016
The quality of writing is markedly lower than in "Stories of the Lone Traveler". I can hardly believe it's the same author.
Bjalf chapter 3 . 10/8/2016
Wow. That was a lot of cliches in one place.
Bjalf chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
You're overdoing it. Please dial it back.

"The Weasels, apparently with Dumbledick's support, had something up their sleeves. Dumbles was keeping him in Durzkaban with some agenda."
"...complete all the slave labor ... um, "chores" ... with minimum fuss. "Aunt" Marge, evil bitch extraordinaire..."
"His chosen scapegoat ... err, the evil Dark Lord of the age"
"Sirius Black had been fortunately ... umm, unfortunately ... lost"
"...feelings for him from the sheep ... err, the wizarding public"
"Albus watched as his pawn moved into the office."

Stop with the unnecessary name-calling. It comes across as the author's personal opinions, and not the thoughts or opinions of the characters. It's not how thought processes work, so it's not thoughts, it's narration. And it's bad narration.

It doesn't add to the story, it detracts from it.
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