Reviews for A Different Universe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think re-reading your Lone Traveller stories has become my Christmas reading tradition. It's funny though- every single year I forget that this one wasn't finished. I can understand why it was left- it's just a bit of a surprise. Anyway, happy Christmas, and thanks again for these lovely stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really sad you didn’t finish this story. I have enjoyed your Lone Traveler series a lot. Thank you for writing them. |
![]() ![]() Nooooooo ! It's the end ! I so wanted to read more ! Anyway, thanks a lot for such a wonderful fic ! Hope to read more one day |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sadly, I'm now entirely bored. The story isn't really going anywhere any more. Everyone seems to be too stupid or evil or indoctrinated to question Dumbledore even after evidence of his crimes comes out publicly. Dumbledore is too stupid to verify any information he's given, leaving Harry and his friends a free hand. Amelia is too stupid to keep secrets. And now it's just become fluff for the past several chapters. There seem to be no actual stakes any more, and I'm having a hard time believing in any of these characters. This kind of story just isn't all that interesting after the first few chapters where everything is resolved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What we learn from this chapter is that Amelia Bones is absolutely useless as a wartime leader. She has zero understanding of operational security or loyalty. The ONE THING that they spent a ton of time on last chapter, including the efforts of literally every person who had just saved her life, was to keep Harry's involvement out of it, so of course she gives it up within minutes and it immediately makes it to the person they were trying to keep it from. Usually I like Amelia Bones in stories like this. This time... she should be used for hippogryph feed. This is obviously one of those stories where EVERYONE is either evil or stupid or both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry didn't update the wards to allow Amelia the prior chapter, yet she stuck around for hours and hours. Minor plot hole there, since the last time she showed up with Hermione she left immediately due to the wards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sixteen years and seven months, eh? And this is the summer before sixth year, so Hermione is about a month short from being seventeen. The Grangers had a shotgun wedding AFTER their daughter was born a bastard! |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN IT! SOMEONE IS CHOPPING ONIONS NEAR ME... MY EYES ARE BURNING AND LEAKING. R.I.P. PADFOOT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 23 chapters of pure fun. I hope someday you decide to finish this one. I will be perusing your other stories. Have a very pleasant day. jjslll54 |
![]() ![]() ![]() An absolutely STUNNING Story. I am in "love" with it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PS: The Weasley-Quote was meant sarcastically! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *has a rathr nasty grin on his face* Poor Poor Weasleys (other than Fred, George, Charlie and Bill) *laughs* Sorry, but it is an amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know what? It's as if sexual activity between minors excites you which i find disturbing. That may be the way that a vast majority of teenagers act but it really doesn't need to be elaborated on. In fact, your elaboration on their 'encounters' is what disturbs me the most. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is Fantastic! PLEASE continue this story! This is one of the few stories I could read time and time and time again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well that was a disgusting breach of trust. I wouldn't want to touch her if I knew everything I did would be relayed to her friends, or any woman interested at the time. |