| Reviews for A Different Universe |
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   Bjalf chapter 4 . 10/8/2016 The quality of writing is markedly lower than in "Stories of the Lone Traveler". I can hardly believe it's the same author. |
| Bjalf chapter 3 . 10/8/2016 Wow. That was a lot of cliches in one place. |
| Bjalf chapter 2 . 10/8/2016 You're overdoing it. Please dial it back. "The Weasels, apparently with Dumbledick's support, had something up their sleeves. Dumbles was keeping him in Durzkaban with some agenda." "...complete all the slave labor ... um, "chores" ... with minimum fuss. "Aunt" Marge, evil bitch extraordinaire..." "His chosen scapegoat ... err, the evil Dark Lord of the age" "Sirius Black had been fortunately ... umm, unfortunately ... lost" "...feelings for him from the sheep ... err, the wizarding public" "Albus watched as his pawn moved into the office." Stop with the unnecessary name-calling. It comes across as the author's personal opinions, and not the thoughts or opinions of the characters. It's not how thought processes work, so it's not thoughts, it's narration. And it's bad narration. It doesn't add to the story, it detracts from it. |
| noylj chapter 23 . 8/18/2016 Well, any chance for more chapters |
| azulkan2 chapter 23 . 7/19/2016 Great story,to bad it appears to be abandoned. Will mark as a favorite any way. |
| dead feather chapter 23 . 7/19/2016 I so wished to see how they handle Hogwarts. As long as dumbledore and co are around this feels unfinished. Harry hasnt actually dealt with them at all. He has been fluffying away with Hermione |
| Sabaku no Sable chapter 23 . 7/18/2016 I noticed this story hasn't been updated in a few years and wondered if it will ever be finished? I am willing to wait but wanted to know if I should or not. |
| firebluebird2006 chapter 9 . 7/18/2016 ok can not find the lemon at all. |
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/14/2016 And what happened this? 2 years and no update? |
| maraudering88 chapter 23 . 7/15/2016 Ahhh i hope you will still continue this story! I'd love to see what would happen next and how this story would end. I also read two other Lone Traveller stories of yours and I greatly enjoyed them. |
| The arithmancer chapter 23 . 7/7/2016 Please continue this... |
| katmom chapter 23 . 6/29/2016 Another enjoyable continued one shot and one I hope you choose to continue! This is really good, as always. Thank you for sharing. Kathie |
| mekareami chapter 23 . 6/23/2016 I really hope someday you add more to this tale. Tyvm for writing |
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/5/2016 Just found this and I hope you continue it. |
| noreenklose chapter 23 . 6/6/2016 Please continue. This is a good story...please finish it. |