I could do without the lemon, especially with teenagers. I mostly enjoyed the story.

You CANNOT leave this story there. Please, PLEASE continue it.

Most excellent 'lemon', well and tastefully written giving a clear image of what is happening without smut. Lovely.

I am disappointed that I could not find the right lemon on adult-fanfiction. It was one about 'Gracie and Alan'. I really do not agree with this site's policy about natural human relations, they're a bunch of Nanny's. Otherwise, I like the story a lot.

Hm, the twins were at Harry's party? Nice. They weren't mentioned before, were they? Hmm, Patils... :-)

Wait, Harry's History exam was interrupted by that vision, wasn't it? So, did they just not count that exam entirely? Not that History would be worth counting at Hogwarts at all...

What a strange concept, a dentist teaching his daughter's boyfriend how to drive. That's what driving schools are there for. Those employ, or are owned by, professional driving instructors, and have special vehicles with pedals on and mirrors for the passenger side. Okay, my country is notorious for over-regulating everything, especially when bureaucracy is involved, but how can a thus badly educated driver be a safe road user? Perhaps living in a country with Autobahns and roughly 70% of them without speed limit changes perception a bit, you NEED to be a somewhat capable driver from the off, before you gain enough experience to become acceptable. But driving a couple hundred metres on a private parking lot is not nearly enough practice to be safe in public traffic.

This is so weird, you've written dumbles as a dark lord but no one is mentioning that and just calling him misguided :/

I wish this story were completed but I guess you had better things to do at the time. Maybe someday soon you'll have the chance to return to it?

Hee hee, Goblins can be great fun!

Love the coffee scene!

I think this story is pretty good for someone still getting their "fanfic writing feet" under them. It doesn't quite fit completely in with the Lone Traveler genre as I remember it - too much horny teenage bs to be taken seriously and an Albus who readers are supposed to believe isn't a complete loon being too parody'ish to really take seriously - but at the end of the day, it's a really good story. Just try to remember that these stories aren't meant to be sex manuals or parodies and you'll be fine.

Any chance this wonderful story will ever be completed? I would love it if it's possible.

Also, and fwiw, a "reading order" for all those lovely Lone Traveler stories would be great!

Whenever Dumbledore says "I'm sure", he has just or is about to lie.

"I will tell everyone who needs to know" Yeah, sure. Nobody needs to know anything in Dumbledore's world except the Great Grand Supreme God-Emperor of the Universe, Albus etc. Dumbledore, Chief Mucketimuck, etc. Even if they die, For The Greater Good, of course, due to insufficient intel. Unless, of course, he needs to tell someone something to manipulate them into doing what he, in his god-like wisdom, decreed as necessary.

And Rowling tried to paint him as the good guy. Refusing medical treatment for an injured child he has obviously claimed responsibility for, and then abandoning the child (over a year old and capable of flying already - so the ability to walk is guaranteed) in a rainy late autumn night at a doorstep. Manipulating the child, ten years later, into becoming a child soldier. That's a war crime, btw. Inviting a dark wizard into a school who has proven beyond doubt that he has no problem with murdering children. Those three alone should put him in a cell in Azkaban to then pour concrete into the lock, and none of them are fanfiction exaggerations, they're canon.

I hope you come back to this story sometime in the future it a good story.

Shame you never finished this story, it did not feel like you had much left to go with it