Reviews for a lack of color
yapmary.vir chapter 1 . 4/18
its really good and unexpected :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
I really liked that :D
pruplup4 chapter 1 . 1/5
I know it's been a long time since this was posted, but I might as well.
If I reviewed everything of yours I've read that'd be pretty much everything you wrote, and it would be a long unintelligible rant of fangirling, so I'll cut to the chase.
One: I love your characterizations of Sakura and Sasuke, here and everywhere. Especially in this, their relationship is so tentative, exactly what I imagined sasuke's homecoming to be before canon blew a hole in that (but let's be real, canon rarely does much else). Sakura is so strong and self assured - an enhanced version of canon Sakura. I dislike Sakura generally but mostly because she has such potential, and like always, you develop her potential to become a kickass tree destroyer here. Thank you. Sasuke is perfect in all his weird mixed feeling self too. No words, really.
Two: the kind of bittersweet ambiguity, I think, is what you do best. It's wonderfully done here, especially. The struggle Sakura has isn't fully, nearly solved at the end: just enough so that it's not a thread left unraveling, but not enough so you have nothing left to ponder. Perfect. That's a hard balance to get at.
Man. So good. You should just do a massive revamp of the manga with a BAMF Sakura.

OH. Kakashi, being my favorite character of all time anywhere everywhere, I loved his mentions in this. I just love him. I've loved him since I was a wee child of four gazing up on the sacred television screen and saw a masked man with his porn.

Sorry, sorry, I'll stop. But this.
Keep doing this.
Fall In Perfection chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
This is cute but practical. Translation: it defines the very essence of Sakura and Sasuke 3
MistyBlue96 chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
YES, I love it when Sakura is the star. And I don't mean like a heroine, but more like a stronger person who is able contribute to the missions. I find it terribly annoying how lots of stories still portray her as a typical damsel-in-distress despite her transformation in Shippuden and powerful training under Tsunade. So thanks for forgoing the usual and writing her the way she actually IS now. :D

The ending was kinda vague but I liked it. It seemed fitting considering that Sasuke isn't one to ever rush into things like love. Probably might take years for them to get together, but I liked how it ended on a note that seemed to say, 'this is the start of something.'

mikomiarisu-chan chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
one of the most awesome story ever! i just love kicking-ass sakura! bravo!
ice-cream-iguana chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I adore this.
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Lovely story! :D
powerofmicrofibre chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
therentyoupay chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Loved it! And yes, I totally listen to your song recommendations!
Sibrael chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I really liked this apart from the ending. It was too abrupt and I didn't get where you were going with it.

I never listen to suggested listenings.
soiguessitsdemi chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This is adorable.

I love Sakura in this, she's so awesome and strong and gah, she wants Sasuke's babies, obviously.

Great job~! :D
nasim chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
that's IT?

continue it,fix it,just KEEP GOING!

this is NOT an ending! i mean sure,it was good and all but for an PROLOGUE maybe! i mean SERIOUSLY? this is IT?

i'm more than disappointed,sorry...i think you're a great writer but maybe some of your stuff is more for yourself than a website...think about it...


Quirky-Green chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
This was fantastic!

Im not usually one for SasuSaku but reading this definitely made me like this couple more.
Serendipithy chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I like this. C:

I like the almost-but-not-AU Sakura you've used, and the idea that Sakura's over Sasuke but not really. Basically, I like all the in-betweens in here. (:
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